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All feedback welcome. Thanks. 
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Features Writer
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This is an very good story so far. Keep it going!
I will and always be a big fan of Lois and Clark forever and forever.
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Oh, I love how this has started. I don't think I've ever read an Alt-Clark story where he went back in time to relive those 3-years over again, this time with Lois at the Planet and he with his secret identity intact.
Will we get more back-story - like finding out how he dealt with Lana? AltClark probably wasn't engaged to Lana in 1993, but he obviously had a long-term relationship with her and she knew about Alt-Clark's differences.
It's interesting that you've inserted Tex in Lex's place. Or maybe Tempus did that himself, eh? Story is interesting and I wants more.
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I am loving this - I love married lois-clark fics, not so hot on alt-clark, but this story has an interesting take on the situation, can't wait for more!
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Very fascinating, and I love the mix of seasons. Looking forward to more...
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Whoa! Great story. Keep it coming! I love the interplay between all the characters.  Artemis
History is easy once you've lived it. - Duncan MacLeod
Writing history is easy once you've lived it. - Artemis
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To lovesuper97, BJ, Sarahg, ChiefPam and Artemis - thanks for reading the story and posting such encouraging FDK.
The second part should be posted in 2-3 days.
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Cool start! I am already hooked! Now our Clark can be like the big brother for the other Clark and help him get through this. I am glad the other Lois is already seeing how bad Tempus is and what she has in her Clark. The wedding of course is a dilemma but I have hope for all 4.  Looking forward to the next part, Natascha
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Oh I really like this so far. More soon please! Laura
Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”
Caroline's "Stardust"
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I'm liking it so far. I've always liked alt-universe stories and this is set up to be a good one. Please post more soon.
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Very intriguing start. The thing I haven't figured out yet, is if Lois has only just learned about her fiance's nefarious ways or if he has been blackmailing her for a longer time  Michael, who recommends that superheroes wear bulletproof vests 
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Thanks for the FDK!
Natascha - re: the big brother bit - that's only the half of it!
Laura - Glad you're enjoying so far. Thanks for posting FDK.
IolantheAlias - Second part is posted. Thanks for reading and FDK.
Michael - hopefully your question will be answered in later parts.
As for the bullet-proof vests - I was unaware Kryptonite-proof vests were available!! If only Lois had one... or two.
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Hey  Loved the story so far... cant wait to read the rest...oo there's another part around so I'd better check on it faster than a speeding bullet. Loved Clark trying to help his Junior... Afterall they are 5 years appart and Clark has a lot to share. Poor Not-our Clark sounds really lost. But there's hope now that Not-our Lois is thinking about him too. MDL.
"Work while you have the light. You are responsible for the talent that has been entrusted to you."
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