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Oh good! I hate Clark's playing games with Lois regarding his secret identity, and I'm so glad he came clean with her - on this night, of all nights! Yes!!!   “This is completely spiraled out of control,” he cried out in frustration. No kidding! Did you read Michael's "The Wedding Crashers", where Clark chose not to tell Lois?  Ann
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I read this with a huge smile on my face. BRILLIANT. Love this little ficcie! I loved how Clark told her he was really Clark, sooo amazing.
LOIS:I don't like you.
MAYSON: Really? Oh god, that is such a relief - I don't like you either.
LOIS: That makes me feel so much better
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Bravo!!  Bob
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“Somebody rejected you,” she asked in a hushed and horrified tone. “Who would be so blind?”
 I really enjoyed this story. I liked that Clark messed up, then logically and honestly fixed things.
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Oh I loved this little story. OK now over to the nfic section with it. 
Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”
Caroline's "Stardust"
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Nice way to end the night!
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This story just brightened my day. Thanks for sharing. 
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light is the office grapevine. (from Nan's fabulous Home series)
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Wonderful little ficcy  Michael
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I love twists on this scene! Your story was great. I thought your Clark in particular was very believable. Thanks!
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This was great! It was an interesting angle - one that I've never seen before - with Lois thinking that Bitchy!Superman must be a clone. And then it just got better and better and had me giggling at lines like: “What right do you have to wander around looking like that. How do you expect women to react to you?”And the whole "billowy" exchange.  This was an original and fun revelation. Good job!
Lois: You know, I have a funny feeling that you didn't tell me your biggest secret.
Clark: Well, just to put your little mind at ease, Lois, you're right.
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And Sue is here giving feedback!!!!  L, that's one huge compliment to you and your story!!! Ann
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