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#61048 02/15/09 10:36 PM
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Reflections TOC

Any comments? My posting schedule is a little slower as I decided to change the plot (didn't like how it played out in my original outline).

Thanks to my beta readers for their help.

Max

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Good part. Probably a more logical section than having them dancing at the ball after the revelation about Lena. More soon.
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I'm glad Clark told Lois the story about Lena (though he left out the Superman part). These memories were eating away at him and he needed to get it off his chest. Although Lois thinks she isn't sensitive, she was sensitive enough to know that something had hurt Clark and to wait until he was ready to tell her the truth. thumbsup And now that they are going to investigate the illegal arms trade together, I imagine it won't take long for Lois to put two and two together and find out what Superman was doing in the Congo one year before. wink
Eagerly waiting more. hyper

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I liked it smile

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I want some of that cake.


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#61053 02/19/09 02:44 AM
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I like how this is going and how Clark seems continuously surprised as to how close he and Lois are becoming. I hope to see the next part real soon


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