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#62213 03/31/09 06:29 AM
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Thanks for the feedback, FOLCs. Terry's got me adding a couple paragraphs to some later parts already.


This *is* my happily ever after.
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Then I'd better say something right now!

She can't fake this. Not even Lois Lane could fake her way past suddenly losing the last ten years of her life. Someone's going to say something that will make her look like a calf looking at a new gate, and Clark will see it, and he'll figure out that something's wrong - although he'll never come up with the real answer on his own. No way anyone could deduce this malady without direct input from Lois.

And she's gonna freak when she finds out that Clark = Superman. Can't wait to see that one.

One request: could we please have longer chapters? These aren't much more than teasers (outstanding teasers, mind you) and they just leave us hungry for more. What? Oh, really? That's the effect you were going for? Well, then, never mind, as long as you don't wait too long between postings.


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I loved Lois' reaction to finding out Clark was her partner. This was my favorite part:

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Maybe Kent had improved in the last ten years. Well, he would have, wouldn't he, if he'd been working under her for that long?
So, Lois of Season 1!

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Lois is faking it well so far! Despite the major shocks she's been getting.

Re Terry's request for more chapters - OK, I second it, but only if you can keep on posting them as rapidly as you have been these shorter chapters.

Basically - MORE SOON!

(thanks.)

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Just popping in to say:

"someone's front porch"

I betcha that porch is somewhere in Kansas! hyper

Off to read the next part.

Keep 'em coming!

~Sira.


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