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Stay Away From Amber Waves Of Grain Pt One - Comments #6280 09/13/03 11:46 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 9,362 Scotland LabRat OP Boards Chief Administrator Emeritus Nobel Peace Prize Winner
OP LabRat Boards Chief Administrator Emeritus Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 9,362 Scotland	Quote “Fascinating, truly; I’m going back to sleep.” Oh, she's bad. Well, this is interesting. I can tell that CountryGirl!Lois is going to be fascinating - and very amusing - to watch. Loved the banter - had to LabRat Athos: If you'd told us what you were doing, we might have been able to plan this properly. Aramis: Yes, sorry. Athos: No, no, by all means, let's keep things suicidal. The Musketeers

Re: Stay Away From Amber Waves Of Grain Pt One - Comments #6281 09/13/03 11:55 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,644 North Carolina, USA C ChiefPam Pulitzer
ChiefPam Pulitzer C Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,644 North Carolina, USA	lol, Jo, this is adorable! Love the banter, and their sexy teasing relationship, and their mutual uncertainty about it... can't wait for part two! PJ

Re: Stay Away From Amber Waves Of Grain Pt One - Comments #6282 09/13/03 11:56 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,992 Sydney Australia T TriciaW Pulitzer
TriciaW Pulitzer T Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,992 Sydney Australia	Jocelyn A great start! Your characterizations are spot on. I'm enjoying this immensely and look forward to reading the next part. Tricia

Re: Stay Away From Amber Waves Of Grain Pt One - Comments #6283 09/14/03 02:10 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY Laurach Pulitzer
Laurach Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY	Very cute! More soon. Laura Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?” Caroline's "Stardust"

Re: Stay Away From Amber Waves Of Grain Pt One - Comments #6284 09/14/03 01:44 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico mariadferdez. Pulitzer
mariadferdez. Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico	Hi, Great piece. MAF Maria D. Ferdez. --- Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age. MAF

Re: Stay Away From Amber Waves Of Grain Pt One - Comments #6285 09/15/03 11:02 AM
Joined: Aug 2003 Posts: 57 Canada Jocelyn Brant Freelance Reporter
Jocelyn Brant Freelance Reporter Joined: Aug 2003 Posts: 57 Canada	Hi all! Thank you for the generally good feedback I've gotten for this story. I'd like to address the epilogue issue . I included this in the story, primarily because I felt the story was too Waffy for my tastes. Yes, in retrospect, it did ruin the story, and should I decide to submit it to the archive, I'll remove it. Generally speaking, I wasn't thrilled with the outcome of this story: it didn't please me, but I posted it anyway. Meh, it happens. But I apologize to anyone who felt that the epilogue was too much, unnecessary, or just plain ruined the story. I'll try better next time . Thanks again guys, for your readership

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