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Good? Bad? Indifferent?
Just an FYI, I am very unlikely to be online tomorrow night, but have my fingers crossed that Tuesday won't be too busy.
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Very very good.  Loved Lois and Clark's mutual admiration  Also enjoyed getting to know the others in their group. I was pleasantly surprised when I found out who Lois' room-mate was  And the last scene, especially Lois figuring out why Clark tends to avoid her... terrific! 
If she had to move heaven and Earth, perhaps come back to haunt Perry and explain the story after they'd killed her, she would do it.
Waking a Miracle by Aria
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Building....building.....their friendship is starting right now, even though it's mostly a matter of arguing.
And Paul has revealed himself to be a shameful excuse for an editor. Good to get that out right away. And I'm glad that L&C have met and have compared stories and heard the gossip, so they know the real reason they didn't win!
I'm looking forward to more action. Will Clark be outed as the Boy In Black? Will Lois find out about him? Or is there more character development to come? Will they spend another year together on campus? Will Lois win the DP internship? Does Clark have a chance?
Ah, questions abound! Please post more soon.
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Great part!
I felt so bad for Clark at the beginning...he's got teenage existential angst with a whole added dimension.
I was so glad the air was cleared between Lois and Clark. I hate when misunderstandings grow out of proportion because of no communication.
I love that Star is Lois's roommate! She's one of my favorite minor characters.
More soon please!
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“I wasn’t thinking about the Titan thing. I just… I really want the Planet internship. I’m sure you’re planning to apply?” I nodded, started to understand where this was going. “I just realized I’m not going to get it,” Lois said quietly before moving through the door of the building.
I placed a hand on her arm. “That’s funny,” I said when she turned to look at me. “Cause I thought the same thing when I read your article.”
“No, you didn’t,” Lois said, dismissively.
“I did. Really,” I told her. “Your article was so much better written than mine.”
Lois laughed. “So neither of us is going to apply thinking the other is going to win?”
I shrugged. “The thought had occurred to me,” I admitted. “But somehow I don’t see you not applying.”
Lois smiled. “Me, neither. Now I just know I need to step up my game.” With another grin at me, she turned and entered the classroom.  Michael
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Thanks so much for the comments! I'm sorry I didn't respond before now and I'm not up to providing the detailed feedback it deserves. I'm not sure exactly what happened, but work sort of exploded this week and I basically didn't do anything but work and sleep all week. Finally finished, but feeling completely worn out.
I do appreciate the feedback, though.
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Finally finished, but feeling completely worn out. I so know the feeling  Michael
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