Thank you, thank you! I absolutely adore feedback!
Happygirl... that little snippet with Henderson was really cute! Although I doubt I'd ever refer to Clark's butt as "little"...
Emma, I'm so thrilled that you found this to be a good take on this ep that has already been reworked to the nth degree.
I do need to clear up one thing about a particular line you mentioned... It was just pointed out to me that it reads almost identically to a line from someone else's fic... Now this was completely unintentional--I'm really not *that* kind of writer, I swear! My only guess is that perhaps I read said fic at some point in the last year or so that I've been devouring L&C stories and the line stuck in my subconscious.
Since the last thing I would want is for someone to feel I had plagiarized their work, I went back and amended the line a little; it now reads: “Just tell him he’d better fly his shiny red heiny over here, or I swear to God, I will never speak to him again.”
I hope that's suitably different, and that no offense was caused. It most definitely was not intended.
Again, I humbly thank you both for the great feedback! FoLCs are the coolest people on earth!