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#64926 07/16/09 06:07 PM
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yay! I was about to go to bed (it's one in the morning here) and then this popped up!
So the story - I am really apprehensive about Lois's mysterious mugging, from the preview, I remember thinking it was Tempus with a time warp, but it was a while ago. love the series, and get wait for more!
oh - is this a wrap up of the series, or will there be more? need to know if they'll be getting engaged and set in this story, or more angst will ensue...

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Nice beginning. clap

I thought the person in the alley would kidnap Lois, or perhaps slipping a piece of kryptonite in Lois pocket (assuming it was someone who knew the secret like Tempus). It seems like nothing happened...

I'm looking forward to the next part.


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Yay, another story jump

The mugging: I, too, thought it was Tempus, pulling her into an alternate universe and she would show up at a Clark's place who doesn't know her or something. So, what's really going on?

Michael


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Sarah Thanks!

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oh - is this a wrap up of the series, or will there be more? need to know if they'll be getting engaged and set in this story, or more angst will ensue...
No - Fic 6 is the wrap up. The first five just put pieces in place - one more piece to go after this - then (for me anyway), the fun begins.

Engaged?? - that question will be answered soon.

Angst?? - uhm ... yes.


Kathryn

Eeek - in some ways you are *so* close, in others not so close. Thanks for leaving FDK!!


Michael

That is a really interesting idea! I can see so many possibilities for it.

However, that's not where we are going in this fic!

Thanks for your FDK.


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I have to recuse myself from commenting, (since I beta'd and I know where this is going,) but I just want to assure everyone that they're in for a treat. Keep on reading.

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It's nice to see this world back again. Although I have to admit that after what happened in the last chapter I'm approaching your stories with my angst defenses set to maximum.

I loved the WAFFY beginning and the mugging was strange indeed. Based on just this chapter alone, I can see where the title of "So Many Questions" comes from.

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Thanks Iolanthe. I'm so glad you enjoyed reading this ... and didn't feel like you were wading through it.

Bob

'Angst Defenses' - cool

Thanks for your FDK.


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