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FDK - So Many Questions (2) #64960 07/17/09 06:23 PM
Joined: Dec 2008 Posts: 2,181 Likes: 29 SW Vic, Australia Female Hawk OP Kerth
OP Female Hawk Kerth Joined: Dec 2008 Posts: 2,181 Likes: 29 SW Vic, Australia	Feedback here. Many thanks.

Re: FDK - So Many Questions (2) #64961 07/18/09 01:52 AM
Joined: Oct 2006 Posts: 117 SC melray1228 Hack from Nowheresville
melray1228 Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Oct 2006 Posts: 117 SC	That was one of the sweetest, most romantic proposal scenes I have ever read! I can't wait for the next installment!! ~Mel~

Re: FDK - So Many Questions (2) #64962 07/18/09 03:49 AM
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amberlea Columnist A Joined: Jul 2008 Posts: 581 Sugar Land, TX	That was so great! Your descriptions of everything are so vivid. But I can't handle the cliffhanger! What is it?!? I'm very glad you are on a frequent posting schedule! Amber

Re: FDK - So Many Questions (2) #64963 07/18/09 07:06 AM
Joined: May 2006 Posts: 483 Likes: 6 Chipper in the Alps Kathryn84 Beat Reporter
Kathryn84 Beat Reporter Joined: May 2006 Posts: 483 Likes: 6 Chipper in the Alps	You can't leave us there! I'm wondering what he has in his hand, and there is something else? Quote That’s one down and two to go. Quote If it goes horribly wrong, can you try to remember that it was never my intention to upset you? I liked how Clark put everything in place for Lois. He is so sweet! Post the next part soon, please! Kathryn

Re: FDK - So Many Questions (2) #64964 07/18/09 03:34 PM
Joined: Apr 2008 Posts: 1,371 Likes: 1 Corvallis bobbart Top Banana
bobbart Top Banana Joined: Apr 2008 Posts: 1,371 Likes: 1 Corvallis	That proposal was truly magnificent! However, I think the more "fun" parts were my favorites: Quote “I have the solution,” Lois announced, grinning. “You do?” he asked, eyebrows raised. “Celibate marriage.” and Quote On one condition,” Lois said, with a teasing smile. “I set the length of our engagement.” “OK.” “I’ll give you two options ... you can choose.” He nodded his agreement. “Three years ... or four.” Clark gulped. Blushed. Seemed to stop breathing. “Three years,” he gasped. He was trying so hard not to look horrified. For both of these I keep seeing the look of horror on Clark's face. An finally, like everyone else I am wondering about what is in his hand. I'm looking forward to the next part but I sill have my shields up. (Once burned and all that...) Bob

Re: FDK - So Many Questions (2) #64965 07/18/09 04:19 PM
Joined: Dec 2008 Posts: 2,181 Likes: 29 SW Vic, Australia Female Hawk OP Kerth
OP Female Hawk Kerth Joined: Dec 2008 Posts: 2,181 Likes: 29 SW Vic, Australia	Melray - so glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for your FDK. Amber - this is a good cliffhanger. And hopefully, it'll be posted later this afternoon. Thanks for your comments. Kathryn - thanks! Yes, I can leave you there ... but not for long! Yes, Clark is sweet - that's one of the reasons he's such fun to write. Bob - Thanks for your comments. I could see the look on Clark's face too! In your FDK for Adrift, you said you were worried the delay in the engagement might cause problems. You'll note that, despite your suggestion, I refrained from evil! There will be some angst, but it will be different to Adrift.

Re: FDK - So Many Questions (2) #64966 07/18/09 10:26 PM
Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,066 Likes: 31 Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,066 Likes: 31	Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww and you sure are piling up questions here, Corrina I expected Lois demanding they elope Quote Lois tightened her hold on his neck, wanting to never let him go. Her mouth waltzed with his and her response slithered lower. Then she remembered ... they were going to wait. Boy, Clark and Lois are going to be quite a bit frustrated during the next few weeks. Poor Jimmy. Poor Perry. Poor criminals Quote “You want me to guess what it is?” Lois asked. Clark smiled hesitantly. “No, I’m trying to work up the courage to give it to you.” This. Is. Not. Funny. At. All. Michael Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, our favorite show, life, and more! (It’s almost like the IRC days of old again!) I go by Michael on the Archives.

Re: FDK - So Many Questions (2) #64967 07/19/09 11:12 AM
Joined: Dec 2008 Posts: 2,181 Likes: 29 SW Vic, Australia Female Hawk OP Kerth
OP Female Hawk Kerth Joined: Dec 2008 Posts: 2,181 Likes: 29 SW Vic, Australia	Michael - Thanks so much for all your wonderful feedback, Michael. The towel was mostly about Lois's comfort - although Clark was busy preparing the food while she changed so it also protected both of them if his eyes inadvertently wandered. With the screen, he had to deliberately look - which they both knew he wouldn't do. Quote This. Is. Not. Funny. At. All. Maybe not, but that comment is Corrina.

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