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Feedback here.

The next part should be posted about this time tomorrow.

Thanks! smile

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Enjoyed this chapter, looking forward to the next one.

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So Clark *had* found a way to feign vulnerability.
I don't think Clark has to feign vulnerability ... knowing Trask there will be a certain green rock involved ... help


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wow. this is getting mighty interesting. loved the bit about perry being worried over an abortion.

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Whoa there help

Corrina, I have no idea how you can drag this out like this, but it's working thumbsup

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cookiesmom Thanks for reading and leaving FDK. Next part is posted.

Kathryn Part 8 is up ... Part 9, hopefully tomorrow.

I've told you where Clark is ... so who did you think grabbed Lois? laugh

Sarah Thanks. Lois is learning the truth of the old saying 'Oh what tangled webs we weave ...'

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The story Lois told Henderson was
Lois has a few more stories up her sleeve laugh

RE - it dragging out. When I started this fic, my muse seriously wanted to go to Fic 5 (called Led Astray), so my plan was to make this short ... 4 or 5 parts. Somehow, it got to 14 blush

But thanks for saying it's working. I'm glad.


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I thought it was Hodge grumble
But you already wrote that Lois thinks he couldn't be because Hodge is taller ...
But it can only be Hodge, or someone who was hired by him a homeless man ... But I can't see Hodge trusting anyone else ... it must have been Hodge!

laugh laugh laugh


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It wasn't Hodge personally, but he did set it up. He couldn't risk being seen with Lois in case she was being followed - so he had to get someone to do it for him.

You were definitely on the right track.

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OMG! Trask is behind Clark's disappearance!!!! Oh, I hate that guy.... eek

I can almost feel Lois concern when she realizes that his fianceè may be hurt :'(

About the acronym, I figured out when I read it at first time, and didn't like it.... Noooooooo, please!! Don't hurt HIM!!!!

And.... a question.... is it a mere coincidence that the bugdetector is called "spy HAWK pro"???? Jijijiji....


Clark: "So what are you saying? I should go crawling back on my hands and knees?"
Martha: "No, honey. Fly back. It's faster!!"
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And.... a question.... is it a mere coincidence that the bugdetector is called "spy HAWK pro"???? Jijijiji....
Yes, it was just coincidence. But it made me smile at the time smile

Thanks for reading and commenting on this old story, chelo.

Corrina.


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