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FDK here.

Part 14 ... either Saturday or late Sunday.

Thanks!

oooh - come back and make things right!!!!! waiting breathlessly for the next installment!

Wonderful, I love it. I loved Martha during her talk with Clark, very insightful. Even though it kept Lois and Clark from talking I am glad she went out with her sister and fried. Sounds like it was a lot of fun. I definitely had this whole scene pictured. It was good that Lois started/deepened her relationship with her sister.

I am anxiously waiting for the next part.

Why is Clark at the church and not knocking on Lois' door.

Oh, I'm so glad Clark finally *did* something! What a great way for him to let Lois know that he was sure about getting married.

Sarah is awesome.

I love your writing.

Amber

This was really an unexpected turn of events. Never seen the time-jump coming and things deteriorating like that. And then the whole time I was wondering if you'd be pulling a break-up on us. Whew, doesn't seem to look like it.

Why isn't Clark back to normal, yet? Not that I can't buy into the whole prolonged green-K exposure takes longer than 24 hours to fix.

LOL to the girl's night out. And Clark must be scared out of his mind

Michael

Great part!

I was worried about the women going out together while Clark was on his way to Lois ...

I hope they'll talk and marry in the next part!

This was very good but so sad. You've captured Clark in all of his bonehead glory. At first I was surprised that he would turn away form Lois so much but I've seen people, particularly men, do that sometimes. She should have yelled at him sooner.

I was sad for Clark when he finally decided to open up but Lois was gone. I loved the ending with him waiting at the church.

Bob

Sorry it took me awhile to get to this ... I did appreciate your FDK.

Sarah Next installment in ... hope you enjoyed it!

robinson I really enjoyed imagining the girls' night out - I'm glad you did too.

Thanks for your comments.

Amber Thanks.

I didn't really plan for Sarah to become so much a part of these stories, but she fits well as a girlfriend for Lois.

I've revised my initial plan for Sarah and given her a nicer 'happily ever after'. Stay tuned.


Michael Thanks for your FDK, Michael.

Partly because he believes he can't. I'm trying to say that his physical trauma may have healed, but his emotional healing takes longer. Of course, being semi-estranged from Lois didn't help any.

Kathryn The reason the girls went away was not just to prolong Clark's agony.

Thanks for all your FDK, Kathryn.


Bob Thanks, Bob.

I was still playing with the role reversal. Clark being a little high-maintenance and Lois being patient and supportive. Eventually, she snapped.


I'm glad you liked Clark's church gesture.


Corrina.