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Ha-ha-ha! That's great! Loved the irony!
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Cute!! Artemis
History is easy once you've lived it. - Duncan MacLeod Writing history is easy once you've lived it. - Artemis
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Lol! I wasn't expecting that!
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Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”
Caroline's "Stardust"
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Thanks for posting this! I've missed your stories.
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Perfect. Short, sweet, to the point. A wonderful last line.
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Oh thank you so much. I'm glad you like this little piece!
It's never too dark to be cool.
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Clark thinks he’s a normal guy, calls himself Dean Cain and is happy with that. And Lois? She’s become a housewife, a desperate one at that. Can you imagine? Lois Lane a housewife? And I thought I loved irony.” Bwa ha ha! Very cute.
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And welcome back, Bakasi! So let's see...5 pts for Herb, 10 for his birthday; that's 15 points for you, plus an extra 20 for making me literally laugh out loud. Good work! ^^
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This was a fantastic fic with an absolutely awesome ending. I LOL'ed when I got to the end.
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Welcome to the real world, Tempus :p I do find it poignant that the fic-world's supervillian only amounts to a bum in the real world. Michael
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Yeah, this was great and it fits the challenge perfectly!! So clever - loved it!
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Wow, so much feedback! I really didn't expect that. Thanks to everyone! Queen of the Capes: 20 points for making you laugh? What a pity I couldn't listen Michael: Yeah, I wondered what Tempus would think of our world - a villian without a superhero to fight against - that would be pretty hard, I suppose...
It's never too dark to be cool.
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