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Comments: Chipped Armor #6674 09/28/03 07:16 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,644 North Carolina, USA C ChiefPam OP Pulitzer
OP ChiefPam Pulitzer C Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,644 North Carolina, USA	Yay, a sequel! This was very cute and I could really see Lois going through all that <g> Great banter, and a great kiss. The line about sounding like an expert sex scene in a movie seemed a little... jarring. If it were me, I'd rephrase it more romantically. Of course, it's not me <g> But I love the last line: Quote a kiss that rivaled the one before. Nice way to tie into the episode title! PJ

Re: Comments: Chipped Armor #6675 09/28/03 07:22 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,454 London (the one in Ontario, Ca... Wendymr Pulitzer
Wendymr Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,454 London (the one in Ontario, Ca...	Oh, terrific sequel, Jo! I simply adore this dialogue: Quote “I’m feeling something,” she said. He closed his mouth and stared at her. “I thought I was supposed to guess.” “You were taking too long.” “You didn’t give me a chance.” “I gave you more than one.” “Can I kiss you?” “Yes, you can.” Oh yeah. I think I agree with Pam about that Hollywood movie line, but other than that this is perfect! So, when do we get more??? Wendy Just a fly-by! waves

Re: Comments: Chipped Armor #6676 09/28/03 03:15 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY Laurach Pulitzer
Laurach Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY	Very Cute story<g> Laura Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?” Caroline's "Stardust"

Re: Comments: Chipped Armor #6677 09/28/03 10:54 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,992 Sydney Australia T TriciaW Pulitzer
TriciaW Pulitzer T Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,992 Sydney Australia	Jocelyn This is great. Tricia

Re: Comments: Chipped Armor #6678 09/29/03 01:25 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,217 Exiled to Mare Nostrum coast daneel Kerth
daneel Kerth Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,217 Exiled to Mare Nostrum coast	Cute, sweet and funny Jose "Practice up your shielding spells...and remember to duck if you see green light coming your way." Harry Potter to Wizengamot in OotP trial A Bad Week in the Wizengamot

Re: Comments: Chipped Armor #6679 09/29/03 12:23 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico mariadferdez. Pulitzer
mariadferdez. Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico	Hi, Cute story. Quote She walked to the door, but hesitated with her hand over the doorknob. “If I were smart, I’d open this door and immediately ignore everything that has happened tonight.” “But...” Clark prodded. He held his breath, praying she’d turn around, run to him, and cover him in soft kisses. He was glad he could hold his breath for a long time, as Lois didn’t respond for several minutes. “But, being smart is so overrated.” She turned and with such determination and purpose, she was in his arms, looping hers about his shoulders, and kissing his lips in a kiss that rivaled the one before. Cute. Maria D. Ferdez. --- Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age. MAF

Re: Comments: Chipped Armor #6680 09/29/03 05:11 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,206 Pacific Northwest RL Top Banana
RL Top Banana Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,206 Pacific Northwest	Very nice sequel, Jo! I enjoyed reading this very much. I like how Lois is able to overcome her fears and admit she hasn't stopped feeling what she was feeling before. -- Roger "The Constitution only gives people the right to pursue happiness. You have to catch it yourself." -- Benjamin Franklin

Re: Comments: Chipped Armor #6681 09/30/03 03:45 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 767 usa merry Features Writer
merry Features Writer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 767 usa	Jocelyn good story merry

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