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Hi, Great part.  Clark groaned softly. This present was yet another reminder of what he had missed last night. He hated himself so much right now -- and he hadn't even opened the gift yet. He deserve it. More soon, please. MAF 
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Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age.
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Thanks, Maria for your fdk! Is anyone else reading this story? I am really nervous about posting it and I am really afraid that lack of fdk means that no one is reading it or people hate it  If you hate it, please don't hesitate to tell me. I'll change anything that's really bad, but I just need to know what it is! I know that people are really busy, so that might be it, too. I am just really nervous about posting this story and really paranoid that no one is reading it. - Laura
Laura "The Yellow Dart" U. (Alicia U. on the archive)
"A hero is an ordinary individual who finds the strength to persevere and endure in spite of overwhelming obstacles." -- Christopher Reeve
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Cute. Penny really has it bad for him, poor girl<g> More soon. Laura
Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”
Caroline's "Stardust"
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Hi,
I'm loving your story Laura! You are doing a great jog describing Lois and Clark's feelings. I was so sorry for Clark!!! And, of course, for Lois too! But they both knew where they were getting when they decided to get married and although Clark can't make too many sacrifices, he is going to have to learn to say "no" to the world sometimes, after all, he is Lois' husband. Post next part soon!
Ingra
Clark: What is that?
Lois: It's my word.
Clark: There is no such word.
Lois: Sure there is. Someone's a chump, therefore, he's chumpy.
Clark: Try again.
Lois: Are you challenging me?
Clark: You bet your sweet little chumpy I am.
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Hi Laura - I'm reading this, but RL has just taken a sudden sharp turn which means that for a while I don't have time for anything.  You're doing a great job of writing a very obsessed Penny - a very funny section. And poor Clark! It's really time that he talked to Lois - I mean, if she left his present out for him, then she must be waiting for him to make the first move? Keep on writing! Wendy 
Just a fly-by! *waves*
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Was she a little obsessed? Nah... :p more!!!  Jose 
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Oh, boy, that was fun! I just dipped in to see what sort of story this was, and giggled my way through Penny's ever-increasingly nutty ideas about Superman. A tail? ROFL!!! I *have* to read this story properly now that I've had such a delectable taster.
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Hi, Laura,
I just now got around to reading this. Life has been incredibly hectic for me recently, but I finally had a chance to just sit down and read.
Penny is unbelievably funny. I'm not sure that "obsessed" even covers it.
Nan
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I am reading, Laura!  Keep writing. AnnaBtG.
What we've got here is failure to communicate...
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Laura,
good part
funny
more soon
merry
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Thank you, for your feedback, Maria, Laura, Ingra, Wendy, Jose, Yvonne, Nan, Anna, and Merry. I really appreaciate it. I know I was being paranoid, but I am really afraid of posting this story. It's the first story with a real a plot and possibly the first nfic (we'll see). I was also really worried that no one was reading it because it is set in the 4th season and that isn't really a popular season.  I know that everyone is busy -- I am really busy myself -- so I should have assumed that people are busy rather than not reading my story because they hate it  . Part 4 is posted now . Laura - Laura 
Laura "The Yellow Dart" U. (Alicia U. on the archive)
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I'm finally catching up with this one after having the dumb stupidity to fall behind. I was planning on just reading to the end and then commenting, but I discovered as I read this segment that I had so much to say I needed to post on it alone. I had a great time with this segment, Laura. I was alternately rolling my eyes, sticking out my tongue, wanting to whack her upside the head with a 2x4 and laughing out loud during Penny's obsessive thoughts about her plans and Superman. It was all superbly written! And poor, poor Clark. But, again, a beautifully written scene with him waking up worried and contrite and Lois's obviously well thought out and intricately planned birthday presents were a delight <waffy sigh> I'm so glad that you wrote and posted this. There aren't enough S4 stories around for this reader. Thank you for sharing. It's quite made my weekend already. LabRat
Athos: If you'd told us what you were doing, we might have been able to plan this properly.
Aramis: Yes, sorry.
Athos: No, no, by all means, let's keep things suicidal.
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