Jude,
I was so happy to find these next two parts posted. I haven't had a chance to get to them yet. But am eager to learn more, and will certainly come back here when I do.
Just wanted you to know I am still out here, still enjoying very much, and eager to put the kids to bed so I can dive in.
CC
edit: I'm back and I love how things are moving along. Clark's hurt is so palpable. His frustration and love for Lois are already evident. I enjoyed the humor that was sprinkled throughout these parts. And still really like your Lex Luthor characterization very much. And now, add to that, Bill Henderson. Glad to see him in on the plan, and interested to see how far into this engagement Lois is willing to go!
Really nice, Jude!