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Any comments are welcome.

I hope you enjoyed the story.


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delightful tale.


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It was a nice conclusion to the story.

I thought those symptoms seemed a little too much like a real early pregnancy.

I like the idea of the sphere reacting to the presence of mixed genes. That makes sense. At least that would provide a physical signature for the globe to detect.

Thanks for sharing.

Bob


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