And you sure packed a lot into two segments!
Loved the revelation - your original characters were well-rounded and believable. Loved the angst - poor Clark and Lois. <snuffle> And then we got a lovely waffy end:
It was a kiss that rendered him--Clark Kent--*Superman*--powerless.
<happy sigh>
Brava!! Let's see more from you soon, huh?
LabRat