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FDK - Treasure Chest 15/15 #70290 03/07/10 10:37 PM
Joined: Dec 2008 Posts: 2,181 Likes: 29 SW Vic, Australia Female Hawk OP Kerth
OP Female Hawk Kerth Joined: Dec 2008 Posts: 2,181 Likes: 29 SW Vic, Australia	Any comments go here. Thanks. Corrina.

Re: FDK - Treasure Chest 15/15 #70291 03/08/10 01:46 AM
Joined: Dec 2004 Posts: 326 R robinson Beat Reporter
robinson Beat Reporter R Joined: Dec 2004 Posts: 326	Excellent story. I loved every part of it. Beautifully written and a beautiful story. I love the steps you showed them taking to resolve it. If they had felt the least uncomfortable when they visited Martha and Jonathan I do not think they would have done it. We have been given so much on this planet including the intelligence to work through problems. Yes sometimes we create our own problems and issues but there are also people who helps us find solutions. Just like in real life, Their decision would not be for everyone but for them it is the right one. Well done! Kathy www.chili-everyway.com robinson

Re: FDK - Treasure Chest 15/15 #70292 03/08/10 06:28 AM
Joined: Jan 2007 Posts: 238 FL angelsgmaw Hack from Nowheresville
angelsgmaw Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Jan 2007 Posts: 238 FL	Great story! Thanks for writing this. It is beyond the edge of most of the warm & fuzzy stories, yet it is so Lois & Clark. I have enjoyed it and will look forward to the "rest of the story." Pat

Re: FDK - Treasure Chest 15/15 #70293 03/08/10 06:47 AM
Joined: Aug 2009 Posts: 338 elizabeth Beat Reporter
elizabeth Beat Reporter Joined: Aug 2009 Posts: 338	Cheers Elizabeth

Re: FDK - Treasure Chest 15/15 #70294 03/08/10 06:59 AM
Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,070 Likes: 31 Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,070 Likes: 31	I think the ending worked wonderfully with the fic. The bases are covered. The characters are happy. The reader is left with a warm and fuzzy feeling So, do your remarks form part 14 indicate a sequel, Corrina? Michael Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, our favorite show, life, and more! (It’s almost like the IRC days of old again!) I go by Michael on the Archives.

Re: FDK - Treasure Chest 15/15 #70295 03/08/10 08:07 AM
Joined: Apr 2008 Posts: 377 USA S sarahg Beat Reporter
sarahg Beat Reporter S Joined: Apr 2008 Posts: 377 USA	wow. sequel?

Re: FDK - Treasure Chest 15/15 #70296 03/08/10 02:45 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY Laurach Pulitzer
Laurach Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY	Nice job. Laura Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?” Caroline's "Stardust"

Re: FDK - Treasure Chest 15/15 #70297 03/09/10 02:22 AM
Joined: May 2009 Posts: 746 South Africa D DW Columnist
DW Columnist D Joined: May 2009 Posts: 746 South Africa	Your ending worked and you did a good job with the story. Sequel???? I wouldn't mind reading more of this and especailly more of Vivienne and the others

Re: FDK - Treasure Chest 15/15 #70298 03/10/10 10:22 PM
Joined: Dec 2008 Posts: 2,181 Likes: 29 SW Vic, Australia Female Hawk OP Kerth
OP Female Hawk Kerth Joined: Dec 2008 Posts: 2,181 Likes: 29 SW Vic, Australia	Kathy Thanks, Kathy. I think this comment is very apt ... Quote Their decision would not be for everyone but for them it is the right one. That happens in RL - people make decisions that I wouldn't make, but I can see it is right for them. Pat I really appreciate your comment, Pat, because I know you felt it would be better if LnC decided against the idea. Elizabeth Thanks Elizabeth. You give wonderful FDK. Michael and DW Thanks for saying the ending worked well, Michael & DW. After all that, it needed to! Sarah and Laura Thanks. I have no plans for a sequel - but I did post an epilogue and I hope that will suffice. Corrina.

Re: FDK - Treasure Chest 15/15 #70299 08/28/13 12:27 PM
Joined: Dec 2012 Posts: 188 MEXICO chelo Hack from Nowheresville
chelo Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Dec 2012 Posts: 188 MEXICO	Wonderful story! An act of loving parenthood from Martha an Jonathan... and an act of true love and commitment from Lois and Clark... This story has make me cry and laugh, excellent as usual! Clark: "So what are you saying? I should go crawling back on my hands and knees?" Martha: "No, honey. Fly back. It's faster!!"

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