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Wasn't sure if I was going to be able to post tomorrow, so I went ahead and posted tonight. smile

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You posted! Hurray! (Off to read now.)

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As usual you have been hanging out for the next chapter... waiting to see if Lois' friends are going to do a little matchmaking to get LnC back together! : )

Please post the next one soon.

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I have very little time to comment, but I just must say... all the people that Clark saved because he was Superman in the show must die now, right, because Clark isn't Superman here? Then what about all the colonists going up in the next launch, when Clark won't be able to eat the bomb that will be set to kill them?

I'm usually not much of a Jimmy fan, but you sure had me chuckling over this:

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A mental image popped in my head of an apron-clad Jimmy approaching me with a pan lined with Post-Its and staplers, and I couldn’t help but chuckle.
Well, neither could I - in fact, I was practically LOLing! thumbsup

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In the L&CN 'verse we often credit Lois with creating Superman because she provided Clark with a super desire to stay in one place and she suggested a change of clothing.

I think in this fic we are going to see Lois create Superman in a much more affirmative manner. I think she will discover his secrets and help him over come his fears.

But I rather think we are in for a very rocky ride along the way.

Looking forward to more.


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Yay, you posted the next part!

I like how you have portrayed Lois so far and Clark certainly needs better comebacks for when dealing with Lois.

There is bound to be a "rocky ride" since Clark isn't his "super" self and how is Lois going to create Superman?.

I must admit, Framework's theory of how Lois will do that sounds appealing and a definite possibility.

Looking forward to the next part smile1

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Interesting. This Clark really *is* a hack from Nowheresville, and Lois treats him (marginally) better. smile

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Hmmm, I can see a lot of possibilities for that locket. What if Lois gets interested in it and "borrows" it, for investigative purposes, of course? And then she loses it - how much will you bet that it is Lex Luthor who gets his hands on it? Clark isn't worried about Luthor but about himself, and he may or may not fly away to hide in the Arctic, but Lois convinces him to come back to Metropolis, and then he can't resist using his powers to help, and then Luthor...

Doesn't this sound like a probable scenario?

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You know, it's actually kind of creepy, reading about the people that died in this version, because Clark was busy irradiating himself with the kryptonite locket. (just assuming that's what happened.) The bus ladies; Beatrice in the theatre tear-down... Clark, Clark, Clark!

I agree with previous posters - I hope Clark comes to his senses soon enough to save Lois and Jimmy from being chained up and left to die, and also that he'll be able to save the colonists' transport. But it's not looking too good right now.

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Thanks for the feedback, everyone!

Elizabeth-- I've been puzzling a little over your response (the "back together" bit particularly) and wasn't sure if you meant to leave it for another story? Or maybe I'm reading too much into the "back"?


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all the people that Clark saved because he was Superman in the show must die now, right, because Clark isn't Superman here? Then what about all the colonists going up in the next launch, when Clark won't be able to eat the bomb that will be set to kill them?
It is pretty amazing how many people Clark saved in the Pilot alone, isn't it?

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I'm usually not much of a Jimmy fan, but you sure had me chuckling over this:

quote: A mental image popped in my head of an apron-clad Jimmy approaching me with a pan lined with Post-Its and staplers, and I couldn’t help but chuckle.
Hahaha. I am glad you chuckled over that! I actually considered removing the line a few times due to its randomness, but I just liked it too myself.

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And I like your portrait of Lois so far, indeed!
I'm glad!

And as for the locket, well, there's a little more on that soon. laugh


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But I rather think we are in for a very rocky ride along the way.
Things do generally tend to be pretty bumpy for the two!


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I like how you have portrayed Lois so far and Clark certainly needs better comebacks for when dealing with Lois.
Thanks! And that's certain about the comebacks-- as comebacks go, Clark's was pretty darn lame.


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This Clark really *is* a hack from Nowheresville, and Lois treats him (marginally) better.
Heh. I like to think that her marginally better treatment of him is Lois Lane's version of kid gloves.


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You know, it's actually kind of creepy, reading about the people that died in this version, because Clark was busy irradiating himself with the kryptonite locket. (just assuming that's what happened.)
Deaths due to inaction point to a sort of ripple in the water effect (granted, with Clark, it's more like waves). Superman is certainly a handy fellow to have around, that's for sure...


Again, thanks for the feedback!

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I wondered how Clark would be able to hear and save the theater and Beatrice. eek I should have known... clap

The Lois and Clark interactions are going to be fun. I think it's nice they are still civil. Looking forward your take on their relationship.

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Michael--

Thank you for your feedback! This made me grin:
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So, this is how a pretend phobia can come in handy! [Clap]
Hehehe. It is pretty handy, eh?


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