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Thoughts?

Rac

Wow! Things are moving along. You're showing the price (one of the prices) Clark and Lois pay for their powers and for what they do. Sobering.

Yeah, wow!

Good part, but a bit too A-plotty to inspire me to make a lot of comments.

Ann

This was another great part. I'm feeling unsettled and nervous for them!

I wonder if all of this will have any effect on Clark's recovery process.

I really enjoy this story - looking forward to more!

Amber

WONDERFUL chapter, wonderful A-plot! Please don't make us wait too long for the next part!

I'd say the A-plot certainly made a comeback with a vengeance.

Great part! Eagerly waiting for more

Michael

Wonderful story. Can't wait to see how it all unfolds.

Hi Rac,


Sorry I haven't posted fdk on your story in such a long time, but every now and again, I try to catch up on the posts I've missed, which isn't always easy.

I do want you to know that I am still enthralled with this story, and how great it is to see Clark making progress. I think the outside threat to his loved ones might just have been the spur he needed to forget his inner devils.

They perhaps are lurking in the depths of his psyche, but it's very encouraging to see him acting in a positive way.

I think it's also great for Lois to be working together with Clark on an investigation. I know both their super persona are involved, but this is back to normal investigative journalism work, the type of work which brought them together.

I look forward to seeing your next post.
Yours Jenni

Great part, Rac. I like the A plot part. I agree with Jenni that a serious investigation like this may get them back to normal (well, normal for them).
Keep it coming!

Artemis

Thanks for your comments, everyone! I know this part was really A-Plotty (especially for a story that has had essentially no A-plot).

Iolan, thanks for your comments. I agree, the price of heroism is sobering. (I'm glad I don't have to do it.)

Thank, DW.

Thanks for taking the time to comment, Ann, especially since this wasn't your cup of tea.

Amber, thank you for your comments. I agree, it'll be interesting to see how this affects Clark.

Thanks, Cookiesmom. I'm working on more.

Michael, as usual, you are right. A-plot with a vengeance indeed.

Glad you're enjoying the story, Seme.

Jenni, thanks for reading and commenting. I'm glad you're enjoying the investigation. I've been having fun writing it.

I agree Artemis, this seems like a good way for them to get back to something like normal (at least for them).

Thanks again, everyone.

Regards,

Rac