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FDK - Some Things are Meant to Be (10/34) #70767 04/06/10 06:00 PM
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OP Deja Vu Beat Reporter D Joined: Feb 2010 Posts: 342 Arkansas	And thus the transport vehicle is saved...

Re: FDK - Some Things are Meant to Be (10/34) #70768 04/06/10 08:22 PM
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Framework4 Kerth F Joined: Dec 2005 Posts: 2,020 Portland, Oregon, USA	Well written and interesting part. Looking forward to more. Framework4

Re: FDK - Some Things are Meant to Be (10/34) #70769 04/07/10 02:18 AM
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DW Columnist D Joined: May 2009 Posts: 746 South Africa	Also looking forward to more; however, was it just my imagination, or was this part shorter than the others? Now, what is the world's reaction going to be as a black-clad man just saved the transport vehicle? And, more importantly, Lois and Lex's reactions?

Re: FDK - Some Things are Meant to Be (10/34) #70770 04/07/10 04:40 AM
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TOC Nobel Peace Prize Winner T Joined: Aug 2005 Posts: 5,797	Fascinating! Good thing that you had Clark save Lois and the colonists, and it would have been weird if you had let them all die. And Clark is doing repentance. I'm reminded of a movie I have seen - could it have been The Name of the Rose? - where a fat monk is torturing himself with a whip. I couldn't help being reminded of that scene when you had Clark expose himself to an unnecessarily large dose of Kryptonite. What is Lois going to say when Clark turns up at work looking worse than ever? And I have to take back what I said in my last FDK - there is more than sulking to Clark's anguish. Ann

Re: FDK - Some Things are Meant to Be (10/34) #70771 04/07/10 09:15 AM
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amberlea Columnist A Joined: Jul 2008 Posts: 581 Sugar Land, TX	I just got caught up with this story, and I really like it! I want to know what happened in Africa and what it's going to take for Lois to get through to Clark (intentionally or unintentionally). I like seeing how Lois reacts to Clark early on when she doesn't perceive him as a threat, as he clearly doesn't have it all together. More soon please!

Re: FDK - Some Things are Meant to Be (10/34) #70772 04/07/10 03:26 PM
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IolantheAlias Pulitzer Joined: Feb 2008 Posts: 2,823	Agreeing with amberlea. More, please!

Re: FDK - Some Things are Meant to Be (10/34) #70773 04/07/10 04:13 PM
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OP Deja Vu Beat Reporter D Joined: Feb 2010 Posts: 342 Arkansas	Framework-- Quote Well written and interesting part. Looking forward to more. Thanks! DW-- Quote Also looking forward to more; however, was it just my imagination, or was this part shorter than the others? Thanks! I think my chapters range from a little over 2,000 to a little under 5,000. This was one that was a little over 2,000. I wanted the chapter break there, so I just went with it. The next chapter is definitely longer, though... Ann-- Quote Good thing that you had Clark save Lois and the colonists, and it would have been weird if you had let them all die. Hahaha. It would have been quite the downer, wouldn't it? Quote And Clark is doing repentance. I'm reminded of a movie I have seen - could it have been The Name of the Rose? - where a fat monk is torturing himself with a whip. I couldn't help being reminded of that scene when you had Clark expose himself to an unnecessarily large dose of Kryptonite. I haven't seen that movie yet, but I must admit the idea of self-flagellation did occur to me while writing. Quote And I have to take back what I said in my last FDK - there is more than sulking to Clark's anguish. I am glad to hear that. I was beginning to worry my portrayal of Clark would really turn everyone away considering all the comments about wanting to smack him, heh. amberlea-- Quote I just got caught up with this story, and I really like it! Thank you! Welcome aboard! Quote I like seeing how Lois reacts to Clark early on when she doesn't perceive him as a threat, as he clearly doesn't have it all together. Heh. Yeah, it's less that she needs to protect herself from him than it is that she needs to protect him from himself. IolantheAlias-- Quote More, please! Okeydokey! Thank you for the feedback, everyone. I appreciate it!

Re: FDK - Some Things are Meant to Be (10/34) #70774 04/08/10 09:10 AM
Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,066 Likes: 31 Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,066 Likes: 31	Interesting twist on the safe, resolving things before anyone even notices something is wrong. But why did he remove Lois from the ship. And he didn't even worry about carrying her while he was carrying her. Or damage her. Clark's certainly over-obsessing. And on the way on becoming a touch-o-holic Michael Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, our favorite show, life, and more! (It’s almost like the IRC days of old again!) I go by Michael on the Archives.

Re: FDK - Some Things are Meant to Be (10/34) #70775 04/08/10 12:22 PM
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OP Deja Vu Beat Reporter D Joined: Feb 2010 Posts: 342 Arkansas	Michael-- Quote And on the way on becoming a touch-o-holic LOL. That he is!! A little bit at a time

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