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Hi, Great start.  You went back time?  This is about the other Lois and Clark, but before Lois trip? I'm lost. 
Maria D. Ferdez.
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Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age.
MAF
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Yay! Elle is posting!  I like where this is going! I like the set-up, I like Lois' scene with her mom. And poor Clark, stranded in L.A. He's gonna need a place to stay . . .  I have only one complaint. Why Caltech?  Send it to USC! ![[Linked Image]](http://www.hatrack.com/ubb/forum/graemlins/evil.gif) Seriously, though, I think UCLA is a more likely candidate for that sort of research. Or possibly a private company.
Do you know the most surprising thing about divorce? It doesn't actually kill you, like a bullet to the heart or a head-on car wreck. It should. When someone you've promised to cherish till death do you part says, "I never loved you," it should kill you instantly.
- Under the Tuscan Sun
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"Realistic", huh? Hmmm... Why do I have this feeling that a more accurate title might be Swear to God, This Time We're Going to be Utterly Evil? Ah, well, the "ride" should be interesting... Phil
Ping! Ping!! Ping!!! -- Mother Box
She's such a chatterbox at times...
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YAY! Elle's back!!!  We've missed you! Okay, much as I really do want the next story in the West Wind series, I also want more of this! I remember the first section for some reason - did you post it before? - but the rest is new to me, and it's excellent.  So I'm going to sit back and enjoy the ride - and hope that it's going to be nicely bumpy but eminently satisfying as well.  MORE!! Wendy (who really likes the Pam quote that Elle has as part of her sig!)
Just a fly-by! *waves*
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/me wonders what is thinking evil-in-training Elle More!!
"Practice up your shielding spells...and remember to duck if you see green light coming your way." Harry Potter to Wizengamot in OotP trial A Bad Week in the Wizengamot
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Dr. Klein is a geek, capital G-eeek. OF course
he would sent something to Caltech...
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Smile when you call Caltechies geeks.
Caltech is a great research institute, but not much known for chemical research. There are far more likely places.
Do you know the most surprising thing about divorce? It doesn't actually kill you, like a bullet to the heart or a head-on car wreck. It should. When someone you've promised to cherish till death do you part says, "I never loved you," it should kill you instantly.
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Elle A wonderful start! I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next. Tricia 
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It's too realistic LOL. I want to beat up Lois' mother. Glad to see this story is back up and roaring.
JD
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Elle,
I loved this! Your Lois is a pleasure to read and spot on. And what a great dilema. Clark grounded as Superman.
Can't wait for more,
CC
You mean we're supposed to have lives?
Oh crap!
~Tank
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Great setup, Elle, and delighted to see this back again. Thanks for reposting - my appalling memory for details needs the jog now and then. <G> Poor Clark, he is in a pickle, isn't he? But can't wait to find out how he gets out of this one. Help, Klein! <g> And poor Lois too - if Clark doesn't find a way back soon he might just find violent murder done at his apartment. More, please! Soon as you can. LabRat 
Athos: If you'd told us what you were doing, we might have been able to plan this properly.
Aramis: Yes, sorry.
Athos: No, no, by all means, let's keep things suicidal.
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Elle
great start
glad you're back
more
merry
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Elle, This is just as good as the first time I read it. (I would've *sworn* that I'd left FDK when I read it, but obviously not.) I can't imagine Ellen simply 'giving up' on the wedding planning. I suspect we've not heard the end of her. Loriel
"Inappropriate attachment" didn't begin to cover the depth of the feelings Vaughn had for Sydney Bristow.
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