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FDK - Some Things are Meant to Be (13/34) #70849 04/09/10 06:35 PM
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OP Deja Vu Beat Reporter D Joined: Feb 2010 Posts: 342 Arkansas	Ah, the dangers of touch...Or something like that...

Re: FDK - Some Things are Meant to Be (13/34) #70850 04/09/10 10:24 PM
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TOC Nobel Peace Prize Winner T Joined: Aug 2005 Posts: 5,797	Quote She lifted her head. “Jimmy!” The young man came rushing over. “You yelled?” You rang? Quote “The Nemean Lion was the first Labor of Hercules,” I explained, being somewhat familiar with Greek mythology. “Its skin was impenetrable, and Hercules had to strangle it to kill it.” “And they’re working with DNA . . . . Clark, you don’t think they’re trying to make invincible animals—or humans—do you?” Is Luthor trying to create a Superman - a Black Knight - of his own? Or is he trying to come up with a way of destroying Clark himself, the real Black Knight deal? Quote “I think James Prowse is behind it,” she told him. “I said some things he didn’t like the other day on the phone, and he threatened me.” “I’ll look into it, Lane, but I have the feeling a bigwig like him would have covered his tracks—if it even is him. You’ve made more enemies than my wife has cousins—and her side of the family breeds like rabbits.” Henderson's wife's cousins? That part of the African sculture was interesting. I wonder what the anguished expression on the sculpture's face means. Quote About three-quarters of the way through the movie, Lois put her head on my shoulder. Though I felt I might melt, I tensed immediately. I wanted to say something, but my breath was caught in my throat. My head was at utter odds with my heart. I knew I needed to ask her to move—I shouldn’t be allowing myself to become accustomed to her touch. It was already dangerous enough to be this close to her. But I couldn’t bring myself to speak. I just sat there in silent turmoil. I found myself holding my breath at this. Quote Eventually, she lifted her eyes to my face. She must have noticed the tightness of my expression because the realization of what she was doing suddenly struck her, and she moved her head off me and scooted further away from me on the couch. “Clark, I’m so sorry—I didn’t mean to . . . I didn’t even realize . . . . ” “It’s okay, Lois,” I said with a gentle smile, nodding my head to turn her attention back to the movie. After staring at me for a few seconds to make certain I really was okay, she returned to watching the movie. I had to close my eyes for a few seconds before I did the same. And though I told myself that it was for the best that she had put this distance between us, I couldn’t shake the strong sense of loss I felt. I share Clark's feeling of loss. How can he get over his phobia? And what will it mean to him to have Lois sleep in his apartment for the next few days at least? Will he get even a wink of sleep himself? Ann

Re: FDK - Some Things are Meant to Be (13/34) #70851 04/10/10 02:50 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 172 New York Seme Hack from Nowheresville
Seme Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 172 New York	How cute? Clark n Lois bonding. I'm so loving this story right now. More plz

Re: FDK - Some Things are Meant to Be (13/34) #70852 04/10/10 05:49 AM
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Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,066 Likes: 31	Interesting twist there. Now you're going completely original, which is nice btw. Unspecified animal research in combination with the Nemean Lion. Maybe spider silk vests on a government contract. And Luthor doesn't like the competition? Wonder when Clark's going to detox long enough to fix Lois's laptop. Certainly not while she's staying with him. And the touching sure is fun. Michael PS: You accidentally got Darth Vader mixed into this in one place Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, our favorite show, life, and more! (It’s almost like the IRC days of old again!) I go by Michael on the Archives.

Re: FDK - Some Things are Meant to Be (13/34) #70853 04/10/10 09:03 AM
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amberlea Columnist A Joined: Jul 2008 Posts: 581 Sugar Land, TX	Ack! You can't stop there! I mean, I'm glad you didn't leave us hanging for long after part 12, but now I just want more! Please? Amber

Re: FDK - Some Things are Meant to Be (13/34) #70854 04/10/10 12:40 PM
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Framework4 Kerth F Joined: Dec 2005 Posts: 2,020 Portland, Oregon, USA	Nice tale thus far. That said Your Lois Lane is very different from canon Lane. I hope you have some bits in the tale to allow us to see why she is less isolative than canon Lois. Framework4

Re: FDK - Some Things are Meant to Be (13/34) #70855 04/10/10 03:24 PM
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OP Deja Vu Beat Reporter D Joined: Feb 2010 Posts: 342 Arkansas	Ann-- Hahaha. Love the portrayal of Jimmy as Lurch and of Henderson's wife's "cousins." Pwahaha. Quote I share Clark's feeling of loss. How can he get over his phobia? It is a pickle, isn't it? Seme-- Quote I'm so loving this story right now. Thanks! I'm glad. Michael-- Quote Now you're going completely original, which is nice btw. Mostly original, yeah. Still some echoes from the series, though! Quote Maybe spider silk vests on a government contract. Hahaha. Maybe they're manufacturing Spider-men? Quote PS: You accidentally got Darth Vader mixed into this in one place LOL. Oops. It should be fixed now. My "secret" is out now--for a lot of the OC names, I mixed and matched the first and last names of Star Wars actors. Prowse obviously being one of them. :p Amber-- Quote Ack! You can't stop there! I mean, I'm glad you didn't leave us hanging for long after part 12, but now I just want more! Hahaha. Guess I'll have to oblige ya! Framework-- Quote Nice tale thus far. Thanks. Quote That said Your Lois Lane is very different from canon Lane. I hope you have some bits in the tale to allow us to see why she is less isolative than canon Lois. Hmm. Well, I guess in part I think it's obvious to her Clark needs someone. But I do touch a tiny bit on Lois's past in places. Guess we'll have to wait and see if the change in character really is believable. If not, I can always make edits/additions. I believe fanfics to be constant WIPs! -- Thank you for your replies, everyone.

Re: FDK - Some Things are Meant to Be (13/34) #70856 04/11/10 12:11 AM
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DW Columnist D Joined: May 2009 Posts: 746 South Africa	Great part! Liked the touching and bonding - Lois keeps "wanting" to touch Clark - I think that was the second or third time she didn't notice - and Clark both likes and dislikes it ...

Re: FDK - Some Things are Meant to Be (13/34) #70857 04/11/10 11:52 AM
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OP Deja Vu Beat Reporter D Joined: Feb 2010 Posts: 342 Arkansas	DW-- Quote Great part! Thanks! Quote Liked the touching and bonding - Lois keeps "wanting" to touch Clark - I think that was the second or third time she didn't notice - and Clark both likes and dislikes it ... Hahaha. We all want to do things we aren't supposed to...

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