Ann--
Ha ha! That's even shorter than "Et tu, Brute?".
Hahaha. Yeah, I thought about doing, "Et tu, Lois?"--but it just didn't quite work the same, heh.
LOL @ it being a continuation of Lynn S. M.'s Superman revelation.
cookiesmom--
Brilliant! But it does need a sequel.
Hahahaha. Thanks. What about something like this (a la
Princess Bride) for a sequel:
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"You killed my father."
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(The "Prepare to die" is understood by the fact that she's holding Kryptonite haha.)
Or for someone feeling particularly villain-friendly, an alternate sequel could be:
"You let Lex die."
Putting Lois in a position like Mayon's--disliking Superman while liking Clark--certainly has to be interesting. I think it's probably been done before, though I can't remember any such fics right offhand...