Ann--
You're right, Clark, these shoes would have been much better!
Hahaha. I think you're absolutely right!
Ah, but it's great to see Clark touching people and actually becoming Superman!
Hehe. It's great that he's moving forward, isn't it?
Tell me, is Shelby, eh, Jericho, really going to be Krypto?
EvelynC--
Hmmm, hey aren't those Dorothy's red shoes -- but Clark doesn't need help getting back to Kansas.
LOL. Hahahahaha.
DW--
Yeah
he's becoming Superman!
Hurrah!
Michael--
So, was Krypto, the Superdog part of the original story or a rapid rewrite-scramble in response to the recent FDK threads?
Heh heh. As Corrina said, the dog's been included all along. This has manifested itself in the foreshadowing with the bulldog outside Platt's building and my attempt to use animal imagery wherever I could!
Uh-huh. Clark getting touched by Lois sure has potential
Haha. ...Changes everything, doesn't it?
Corrina--
I've been following the FDK threads with interest and they've given me more than a few
Hahaha. Me too!!
Not being a dog person, I was indifferent at first but the more I read, the better I liked the inclusion of Krypto in this wonderful story.
Which I'm definitely glad about! It's been hard to be inclusive but not annoying with the dog. Writing animals is surprisingly hard work...
IolantheAlias--
It's good to see Clark getting the Suit, but I'm still wondering what happened with Constance back in Africa! You evil cliffhanger person, you!
Hehehe. I think that might be the first time someone has called me evil! But I can't give all the answers right now, can I?