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FDK - A (Super) Brief Paws (1/2) #71720 05/16/10 05:47 PM
Joined: Feb 2010 Posts: 342 Arkansas D Deja Vu OP Beat Reporter
OP Deja Vu Beat Reporter D Joined: Feb 2010 Posts: 342 Arkansas	Initially, this story was in one part, but after Corrina suggested extending it, it got sort of long, so I decided to split it into two parts.

Re: FDK - A (Super) Brief Paws (1/2) #71721 05/17/10 01:24 AM
Joined: Feb 2010 Posts: 4,425 Likes: 1 Delaware L Lynn S. M. Pulitzer
Lynn S. M. Pulitzer L Joined: Feb 2010 Posts: 4,425 Likes: 1 Delaware	What a creative and dog-gone funny story! cheers, Lynn

Re: FDK - A (Super) Brief Paws (1/2) #71722 05/17/10 02:13 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY Laurach Pulitzer
Laurach Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY	LOL This is really cute! Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?” Caroline's "Stardust"

Re: FDK - A (Super) Brief Paws (1/2) #71723 05/17/10 05:01 AM
Joined: Aug 2005 Posts: 5,797 T TOC Nobel Peace Prize Winner
TOC Nobel Peace Prize Winner T Joined: Aug 2005 Posts: 5,797	Very funny indeed! But scary too! Quote Clark looked left and then right, baffled as to how exactly he had ended up there. Had that wooden talisman done this to him? And why? He looked down to his hands, mystified as to why there were black sticks beneath him. Then his jaw dropped. Those black things beneath him were not sticks or hands . . . . They were paws. In a panic, he twisted his head around, only to find exactly what he had feared: a tail. What was going on?! He spun around, trying to capture that tail in hopes that it didn’t belong to him, but he had no such luck. When he moved, so did it. What a nightmare!!! Imagine!!! But even if it's scary and horrible, it's cute too... and I love that Clark wants to use his dog form to comfort Lois. I love, too, that Clark is really becoming more canine in his new body. His obsession with that Twinkie could only be displayed by a dog! This is really very creative and very entertaining! Ann

Re: FDK - A (Super) Brief Paws (1/2) #71724 05/17/10 05:53 AM
Joined: May 2009 Posts: 746 South Africa D DW Columnist
DW Columnist D Joined: May 2009 Posts: 746 South Africa	LOL. Quote She shut the door and locked it, and the noise somehow reminded him of just how strange a predicament he was in. What in the world was he going to do? Somehow, he didn't think biting down on a pencil and laboriously writing out “Sorry, Lois, I’m not dead. I just got reincarnated into the body of a dog. Love, Clark” was going to be his best option. Why had this happened to him? Was this development permanent? Was he going to literally become Lois’s lapdog? One step at a time, he told himself. You’ll figure something out. This is one of the best parts in the story so far! And this part too: Quote Unfortunately, he didn’t know how to act like a dog. That was definitely not a skill set he’d picked up on his travels. That was great and I am looking forward to know what happens in part 2!

Re: FDK - A (Super) Brief Paws (1/2) #71725 05/17/10 03:01 PM
Joined: Feb 2008 Posts: 2,823 IolantheAlias Pulitzer
IolantheAlias Pulitzer Joined: Feb 2008 Posts: 2,823	Yeah, at first I thought this was a one-parter, and I was thinking, "You ended it there?!" Fortunately for my peace of mind, there's another chapter coming. And, yes, the fic - funny! And poignant too.

Re: FDK - A (Super) Brief Paws (1/2) #71726 05/17/10 05:17 PM
Joined: Feb 2010 Posts: 342 Arkansas D Deja Vu OP Beat Reporter
OP Deja Vu Beat Reporter D Joined: Feb 2010 Posts: 342 Arkansas	Thanks for the feedback, folks! --------------------------------------- Lynn-- Quote What a creative and dog-gone funny story! Bwahaha. Thank you! I think that comment is very...fetching? Laurach-- Thanks. I'm glad you think so! Ann-- Heh heh. It would be scary to suddenly find yourself in an animal's body, wouldn't it? I wouldn't have the slightest clue how to react! Quote But even if it's scary and horrible, it's cute too... and I love that Clark wants to use his dog form to comfort Lois. Heh heh. He really is a Boy Scout, isn't he? Quote I love, too, that Clark is really becoming more canine in his new body. His obsession with that Twinkie could only be displayed by a dog! Hahahah. It's true! Reminds me of one of my dogs. Quote This is really very creative and very entertaining! Thank you! DW-- Hehehe. I am glad you liked it! Iolanthe-- Whoops! Sorry about the scare there. The fic was initially ending in a different spot in the second part-- I wouldn't have just stopped it there with Clark having cream on his face, heh heh.

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