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FDK - Everywhere 2/? #72152 06/10/10 06:05 AM
Joined: Feb 2010 Posts: 4,425 Likes: 1 Delaware L Lynn S. M. OP Pulitzer
OP Lynn S. M. Pulitzer L Joined: Feb 2010 Posts: 4,425 Likes: 1 Delaware	Well done, if somewhat painful to read. As I mentioned in my feedback for part 1, I have a tough time watching this part of their story arc on TV. I hurt too much on both of their behalf. It is a testament to your writing abilities that I am still following your story. Quote And if a frog had wings, he wouldn’t bump his butt when he hopped! Thank you for that much-needed injection of humour. Joy, Lynn

Re: FDK - Everywhere 2/? #72153 06/10/10 08:00 AM
Joined: May 2009 Posts: 746 South Africa D DW Columnist
DW Columnist D Joined: May 2009 Posts: 746 South Africa	I agree with Lynn - it is not my favourite part of the L&C story either, because Clark being a lunkhead/noble just doesn't provide good consequences. But I am enjoying the story and cannot wait for the next part!

Re: FDK - Everywhere 2/? #72154 06/10/10 08:01 PM
Joined: Sep 2004 Posts: 52 flowerpot Freelance Reporter
flowerpot Freelance Reporter Joined: Sep 2004 Posts: 52	hahaha, favorite line: And if a frog had wings, he wouldn’t bump his butt when he hopped! hmm intrigue, who's this patrick character? will he be a lex luthor type villain, or just serious competition for clark? interesting

Re: FDK - Everywhere 2/? #72155 06/11/10 03:07 AM
Joined: Jan 2007 Posts: 1,208 Sugar Land, TX stephnachia Top Banana
stephnachia Top Banana Joined: Jan 2007 Posts: 1,208 Sugar Land, TX	Excellent story SQD. I am REALLY loving this story. This part of the LnC relationship was hard to watch but I'm hoping everything ends up okay in your story as well... And Flowerpot, I don't presume to know how SQD is going to write Patrick, but so far she's following the LnC canon so I would say that Patrick is the same guy from the LnC episode WIEAK, Season 3 ep. 4. A government which robs Peter to pay Paul can always depend on the support of Paul. -George Bernard Shaw

Re: FDK - Everywhere 2/? #72156 06/11/10 05:21 AM
Joined: Aug 2005 Posts: 5,797 T TOC Nobel Peace Prize Winner
TOC Nobel Peace Prize Winner T Joined: Aug 2005 Posts: 5,797	Great part, Squid! Clark was really possessive in "Contact", in a very bad way. He wanted to break up with Lois and at the same time he wanted to control her. Admittedly he really just wanted to protect her. But he couldn't really accept that he doesn't own Lois, and he has no say at all about what she is going to do if he has broken off with her. Quote Martha had promptly given him a lecture about having his cake and eating it, too. His mother was upset with him about his decision to distance himself from Lois. He’d tried to explain, but repeating it had sounded so... dumb. Yes, it sounded dumb because it was dumb! But go, Martha! I really liked that Lois auctioned herself off. Of course, it is definitely possible that she has dived right in without checking the water level first. Again. Looking forward to part 3 of this! Ann

Re: FDK - Everywhere 2/? #72157 06/11/10 08:32 AM
Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,066 Likes: 31 Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,066 Likes: 31	I completely forgot about the green-eyed monster. No idea where you're taking this, so please, more? Michael Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, our favorite show, life, and more! (It’s almost like the IRC days of old again!) I go by Michael on the Archives.

Re: FDK - Everywhere 2/? #72158 06/11/10 03:43 PM
Joined: Feb 2007 Posts: 351 California EvelynC Beat Reporter
EvelynC Beat Reporter Joined: Feb 2007 Posts: 351 California	Most interesting! I am impatient to see if this Patrick is like L&C canon, in which case, Lois definitely jumps in without checking the water level. Great writing, and hope we won't have to wait too long to see your next installment! Thank you! EvelynC

Re: FDK - Everywhere 2/? #72159 06/12/10 08:07 PM
Joined: Jun 2010 Posts: 1,200 Boston, MA mozartmaid Top Banana
mozartmaid Top Banana Joined: Jun 2010 Posts: 1,200 Boston, MA	Where is part three! Everyday I've been checking the boards to see if you've posted more. More, please! More!! Reach for the moon, for even if you fail, you'll still land among the stars... and who knows? Maybe you'll meet Superman along the way.

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