Great part, but very, very sad.
Just one query: Should the first line in the second paragraph
From there, Lois boarded a plane bound for Africa. The illegal African diamond trade seemed like the next juicy story waiting to be told.
Smuggling diamonds across the borders of South African countries was indeed a juicy story. It was also a very dangerous one. She met a few people that become invaluable to her survival. She also stumbled onto the hot topic of children being forced into the rebel army. That story earned her a broken arm and a scar above her left eye.
not be: Smuggling diamonds across the borders of
Southern African countries was indeed a juicy story ?
Looking forward to what happens next and when Lois and Clark will one day see each other again!
... I like how you're refering to events in the episodes as a way to mark time... I just don't want a clone Lois to show up with no real Lois in sight! Please don't do that to us!! 
