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FDK Wine and Circumstance 7/9? #73363 08/25/10 11:30 PM
Joined: Jun 2010 Posts: 1,200 Boston, MA mozartmaid OP Top Banana
OP mozartmaid Top Banana Joined: Jun 2010 Posts: 1,200 Boston, MA	Hope you forgive me for using so much of the episode's dialogue in this part (all belonging Warner Bros and their respective writers, please don't sue, etc)--promise it will be much less next time! But I couldn't help it--how perfectly accurate were the lines in the script that were merely suppositions and innuendos in the original, but turned out to be right on the money in my version? I simply couldn't resist, especially Perry's little assessment! I know I should know if it's complete by now, and it ALMOST is... part 9 may be the last, but I'm not ready to drop the question mark yet. Reach for the moon, for even if you fail, you'll still land among the stars... and who knows? Maybe you'll meet Superman along the way.

Re: FDK Wine and Circumstance 7/9? #73364 08/26/10 09:02 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,837 California fly-over country Artemis Pulitzer
Artemis Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,837 California fly-over country	Great part! Yes, we kind of knew where the plot was going, but the twist with them being married worked very well. It will be interesting to see how you tie it up. regards Artemis History is easy once you've lived it. - Duncan MacLeod Writing history is easy once you've lived it. - Artemis

Re: FDK Wine and Circumstance 7/9? #73365 08/26/10 10:46 AM
Joined: Feb 2007 Posts: 351 California EvelynC Beat Reporter
EvelynC Beat Reporter Joined: Feb 2007 Posts: 351 California	Well done! Can't wait to see how you handle the rest. I particularly loved this: Quote He reached out to cup her face; it was their touch. One they had shared so many times, both with him as Superman and as Clark. She looked up at him in surprise. <<He had tried to tell me. He just could never find the words...>> Was that in the original script? Very interesting. Really enjoying your story and that episode's plot actually works better for me with your changes and additions! EvelynC

Re: FDK Wine and Circumstance 7/9? #73366 08/27/10 07:40 AM
Joined: Aug 2004 Posts: 2,578 Likes: 10 Brazil - RS Ultra Woman Pulitzer
Ultra Woman Pulitzer Joined: Aug 2004 Posts: 2,578 Likes: 10 Brazil - RS	Great part! Andreia "My wife's love is what unites Krypton and Earth in my heart. Without it, without her, I truly would be in hell." ~ Superman: Man of Tomorrow #15

Re: FDK Wine and Circumstance 7/9? #73367 08/28/10 07:20 AM
Joined: May 2009 Posts: 746 South Africa D DW Columnist
DW Columnist D Joined: May 2009 Posts: 746 South Africa	Well done! Looking forward to the next parts to see how this plays out!

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