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I wrote this little vignette in less than an hour. I'm sure it's not perfect, but it was fun to write. Comments always welcome! 
Reach for the moon, for even if you fail, you'll still land among the stars... and who knows? Maybe you'll meet Superman along the way. 
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Awwww....  Joy, Lynn
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Perfect timing too! Loved it!
Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”
Caroline's "Stardust"
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Very creative, and I love Lois's internal monologue. 
This *is* my happily ever after.
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Wonderful! I love how you used those minutes (one of my favorite moments between L&C on the show) 7:00...7:01...7:02... 
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Aw, glad I could bring you all a smile! So any one else gonna take up the one hour time change challenge??
Reach for the moon, for even if you fail, you'll still land among the stars... and who knows? Maybe you'll meet Superman along the way.
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Boards Chief Administrator Emeritus Nobel Peace Prize Winner
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Awwwww - just adorable! LabRat
Athos: If you'd told us what you were doing, we might have been able to plan this properly.
Aramis: Yes, sorry.
Athos: No, no, by all means, let's keep things suicidal.
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Aww, that was sweet and adorable and pretty clever
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Hilarious, indeed. I sort of expected this outcome, but somewhere along the line of Lois's waiting, I managed to calculate the effect in the wrong direction   Michael
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Thanks, for taking the challenge. about Clark's running off: Clark seemed perfect in every way except for that one thing and it always made her feel just a bit unwanted. I never thought of Lois reacting in that way, and yet it makes sense given her character. <<I won't cry. I refuse to cry...>>
7:33. Lois gave in to the tears. I know this is sad, but it made me grin a bit. Heartless, I know. Good to see the wallowing followed by 'anger' and then 'huff' - much healthier and very 'Lois' . And even better, when Clark shows up. Just a matter of time, after all. btw, I'm impressed that you could do this in less than hour! Nice vignette, mozartaid. carol
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That is soooo like something I would actually do myself, before being married.
Nicely done.
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That was clever. Clark's sudden disappearances would drive me nuts too. Love the mention about how Superman wouldn't stand her up. <g>
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This was great--very subtly done. I loved this episode and so it was nice to see their date, or at least the beginning of it. I love how hard she took Clark's absence due to her own insecurities, and also how he didn't get angry at her--does he ever, come to think of it? Thanks.
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