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As always, feedback appreciated! 
Reach for the moon, for even if you fail, you'll still land among the stars... and who knows? Maybe you'll meet Superman along the way. 
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What an exciting premise- seeing Lois and Clark get to know each other under very different circumstances. Looking forward to seeing how you develop this.
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Yay! Another MozartMaid fic.  I have made it a policy not to start reading posted fiction until the author knows how many parts the fiction will entail, and so I will wait to start reading this story. But I will eagerly be checking each post for the time when you replace the question mark with a number. Joy, Lynn
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Ok, you got my attention.
"I'm red-eyed, tired and drunk" Teri Hatcher
"Fun will now commence" 7of9
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Hoooya! That's a good premise. I loved the movie and I love when both have secrets. But what would keep Lois in the jungle for 2 years and she has a family? More soon!  Artemis
History is easy once you've lived it. - Duncan MacLeod
Writing history is easy once you've lived it. - Artemis
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But but but this is not in the nfic folder! Waaaaaaaaaa! So I guess that means it is just a tease. ;-)
Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”
Caroline's "Stardust"
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Well, we can hope in a future chapter, Laura  Artemis
History is easy once you've lived it. - Duncan MacLeod
Writing history is easy once you've lived it. - Artemis
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Wow! That certainly starts the fic off with a bang!
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Well, that's what I call an intriguing start. And scary.  Hmm... does that mean they will get married after their ONS? And would this mean he gets married to Linda or to Lois? Clark rested his hand on the small of her back in a proprietary manner, ushering her out of the bar and down the hall into the room he had rented for the night. Wow, that's trusting. Either, Lois is really scared of those guys or she's much changed from the classic image of a 'respectable' woman. There's, of course, always the bond-and-instant-trust option. She took his hand, and he held it just a fraction longer than was necessary. She cleared her throat, but didn’t take her hand away. "Thanks... I’m L... Linda." Or this. But if this is Linda, then where is Lois?  Michael
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Very interesting premise and I'm intrigued to see where this will go!  And two years in the Congo cannot be fun. Only down side is waiting a week for the next part 
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I, too, am looking formward to more of this.
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Compelling beginning! I concur with the others in that I am looking forward to more soon. 
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Somehow got a double post---Admin, please delete this one. Thanks!
Reach for the moon, for even if you fail, you'll still land among the stars... and who knows? Maybe you'll meet Superman along the way.
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Glad to see you guys are up for the ride! I'm excited too!!  Lynn M. S. Aww... well, I know it will be more than 10 (and my parts will hopefully mostly be longer than normal) cause I've hit that point already. I think there will be close to 20, but not going to say until I have it finished. Laurach and Artemis Sorry, no nfic Some of your questions will be answered in the next part, Michael . Stay tuned...
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