bellarase Thank you so much for all the quick updates!!!
You're welcome. However ...
Those of you who read AMH as I posted it might remember that parts slowed a bit in the middle while I travelled to Montreal, Canada to visit my daughter. Well, my daughter will arrive home in Oz on Thursday morning!!
I am constantly amazed by the readers in this fandom. I was a little concerned about the early parts of Trail - I felt that they had to be a little slower while Clark tried to find his feet, and I wasn't sure how that would be accepted. Thanks!
Evelyn See reply above. Thanks for the reassurance that this isn't getting bogged down.
MozartMaid We don't get McIntosh apples in my part of the world, but when I was in Montreal, I went to an apple farm that grew them. They were delicious - very similar to Pink Ladies - my favourite apple.
DW And it is awesome that this Lois is so patient with him.
It's a balance - when to push a little, when to back off.
Amy Shadbolt is going to play Scardino like a violin.
Uhmmm. Close. Maybe.
Vicki I'm still thinking he might be the one to help them find Martha.
Two agents + one superhero - that might be enough to find her!
Emily Clark seems to be making progress and apparently looking hot while doing so,
Did you ever expect anything else???
Joy Shadbolt and Scardino ... I haven't finished with either of them yet.
Kathy I think meeting Lois Lane turned out to be a pivotal moment in his life,
Great point.
Michael For some reason his line stuck. I've got no idea, but had the fast food industry already evolved into cars having hidden food holders and people regularly eating in their cars while driving
I spent an inordinate amount of time trying to ascertain if a 1990 Buick Regal came with cup holders. Eventually, I discovered that you could buy cup holders and fit them to your Buick - so Sam's car has them!!
Seme Thanks - so glad you're still reading.
Tank We know that Clark will suffer a long time before he dies at Moyne's hand, but hopefully Lois' end will be quick.
/anxiously looks to Goo to see if he has any other ideas in mind./
Vicki The 'fun' with the kiss... Because Lois *didn't* kiss him in the cell, we got the conversation when he asked her if she had almost kissed him. The fact that they hadn't kissed made it more telling when Clark blew Lois a kiss through the pane of glass on the final morning in the cell.
I already have a conversation written for Story 4 which wouldn't work if the kiss had come quickly.
I hope that qualifies as 'fun'
Shock therapy ...
LadyMoira Thanks for taking the time to leave FDK.
Hopefully the fic is giving you some relaxation in a busy life.
Kathryn Shadbolt, Moyne, Scardino, Menzies - uhmm.
Laura I have to go out this evening. If I get in early enough, I'll try to post Part 4 then. If not, it will be tomorrow morning.
Again,
to everyone for such wonderful FDK. You are the best!
Corrina.
I thought you were talking about their first actual, physical kiss.