Gosh, FoLCs, Thank You!
It's great to see such a positive response to my version of Lois here. I've certainly not had so much fun getting into her head, as it were! Lois has always been a fun challenge to write, but doing so in the first person is a bit of a personal demon of mine, and this is the first story I've felt like I've got a really good sense of her voice, inside and out. I'm really glad to see you're all happily entertained by her!
Part Two of this Chapter is up! That fast enough? :p ...and I'm not sure what proper FDK-thread protocol should be for a multi-part single chapter of such a long story as this will be, so unless y'all tell me otherwise, I thought I'd leave this as the single thread for all comments on this Chapter. I'll open a new thread for each separate Chapter, but since each of those is the equivalent of an episode and turning rather lengthy, it's easier to write and post it in these smaller parts. That work for everyone?
