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FDK - Nobody's Fool (Chapter 2)2/5 #77352 02/16/11 03:29 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY Laurach OP Pulitzer
OP Laurach Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY	Very cute banter and I love her inner voice. Clark is adorable. How will she resist him? And can't he tell she is aroused by her body signs? Sweet dreams indeed! More soon. Laura Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?” Caroline's "Stardust"

Re: FDK - Nobody's Fool (Chapter 2)2/5 #77353 02/16/11 03:57 PM
Joined: May 2010 Posts: 33 K katie123 Blogger
katie123 Blogger K Joined: May 2010 Posts: 33	OOOH this is so much fun! I almost missed this story because it didn't have the little blue arrow. As much as her guessing the truth so early alters the premise of the series, Lois' voice and reactions are so genuine it's believable. Don't want it to ever end... more please!

Re: FDK - Nobody's Fool (Chapter 2)2/5 #77354 02/16/11 04:07 PM
Joined: Jun 2010 Posts: 1,200 Boston, MA mozartmaid Top Banana
mozartmaid Top Banana Joined: Jun 2010 Posts: 1,200 Boston, MA	Yay! So fun and just too sweet! Loved this chapter--more, more, MORE!! Reach for the moon, for even if you fail, you'll still land among the stars... and who knows? Maybe you'll meet Superman along the way.

Re: FDK - Nobody's Fool (Chapter 2)2/5 #77355 02/16/11 05:09 PM
Joined: Feb 2008 Posts: 2,823 IolantheAlias Pulitzer
IolantheAlias Pulitzer Joined: Feb 2008 Posts: 2,823	Having Lois know right from the start is a great set-up. And hearing her internal monologue about "I have to treat him as two different people... but wow, is he hot!" is just great.

Re: FDK - Nobody's Fool (Chapter 2)2/5 #77356 02/17/11 04:50 AM
Joined: Feb 2010 Posts: 4,425 Likes: 1 Delaware L Lynn S. M. Pulitzer
Lynn S. M. Pulitzer L Joined: Feb 2010 Posts: 4,425 Likes: 1 Delaware	Happy, happy sigh! You've mixed a huge helping of fun with a goodly measure of WAFF. A sure recipe for a pleasing story. I'd like to go back for another serving. Will it be ready soon? Joy, Lynn p.s., If Lois knew about 42, perhaps she should join the conventioneers?

Re: FDK - Nobody's Fool (Chapter 2)2/5 #77357 02/17/11 06:23 AM
Joined: May 2009 Posts: 746 South Africa D DW Columnist
DW Columnist D Joined: May 2009 Posts: 746 South Africa	Yay, you posted again! Totally loved this part - especially the part about being twelve - that was so cute

Re: FDK - Nobody's Fool (Chapter 2)2/5 #77358 02/24/11 09:25 AM
Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,066 Likes: 31 Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,066 Likes: 31	Oooh, you're continuing this! Lois conscious attempts at self-deception are really funny. Very nice S1 adaption Michael Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, our favorite show, life, and more! (It’s almost like the IRC days of old again!) I go by Michael on the Archives.

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