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Parts 1 -19 can be found Here This part was especially great to write, FoLCs!  Alicia gave me the technical information about ultrasounds and I had so much fun letting Dr. Klein explain all that to Superman. That part went back and forth between Alicia and me until I got it right. I know absolutely nothing about medical devices, so all credit for that goes to Alicia!  Thanks, Alicia, you're a true FoLC! I enjoyed working with you and maybe we can do it again sometime.  I hope you other FoLCs will like this part too and will want to comment on it. 
Lois: Well, I like my quirks. I think they make me unique.
Clark: You certainly are unique.
Clark: You're high maintenance, you know that?
Lois: But I'm worth it!
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I loved it!!  Wonderful part. I really liked the talk between Clark and Jimmy. But could it be that the posted part isn't complete? It ends kinda strange, as if there's something missing. I can't wait to read the next part!!! Ren
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You're right, Ren, it wasn't complete!  I'm baffled. I really don't know why only half of this chapter got uploaded. I have corrected it and now it's okay.  Thanks for mentioning it, Ren. I'm gad you liked what you read fo far!
Lois: Well, I like my quirks. I think they make me unique.
Clark: You certainly are unique.
Clark: You're high maintenance, you know that?
Lois: But I'm worth it!
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Otays!! Thanks for pointing the way to the TOC, Xanabee - I've saved the previous parts and will read them a little later, and then give you some fdk, there is a promise. But my eyelids are starting to glue together, as it's 3am, so I will return tomorrow...
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Ursie, You already know that I love this part. I was LOLing again as I read through the whole part with Dr. Klein! You did an excellent job describing the ultrasound - Alicia 
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Hi Ursie, I could really relate to Lois having an ultrasound. It is a very special moment when you see that very tiny life inside you and hear the heartbeats for the very first time.  Dr. Klein is excellent! I also love the conversation between Clark and Jimmy and how you tie up all those little details. It was nice meeting Megan again and hearing about the Keyes' baby. Great part! Looking forward to reading more. Christine
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Ursula This is another excellent part. I'm thoroughly enjoying reading this and look forward to more. Tricia 
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Great to see these comments in here. Cool! Ren, I hope you had a chance to read the whole part? I remember when I was posting there seemed to be a glitch. When I clicked to upload the post I got the response that the page wasn't available. Then later when I checked I saw the post had been added but I didn't think to check if it was complete. Sorry about that! Melisma, I'm so glad you're catching up on this story. 
Lois: Well, I like my quirks. I think they make me unique.
Clark: You certainly are unique.
Clark: You're high maintenance, you know that?
Lois: But I'm worth it!
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Originally posted by Xanabee: You're right, Ren, it wasn't complete! I'm baffled. I really don't know why only half of this chapter got uploaded. I have corrected it and now it's okay. Thanks for mentioning it, Ren. I'm gad you liked what you read fo far! No problem. And it's good to see the whole part. Ren
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Ursie,
excellent part
ditto others
more soon please
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I think i figured it out. The two students Dr. Klein is talking about are Alicia and her friend Rachel, right? Nice touch, Ursie! So, Alicia, did you really burn down a lab?  Casey P.S. Great part! I love Clark and Jimmy's conversation at the hospital. And it was nice to see Megan there too.
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LOL, Casey, I didn't exactly burn down a lab, but I did set my circuit board and power supply on fire without even realizing it . We put it out pretty quickly, though... no one even noticed. Okay, the fire alarm went off, but no one realized it was us that had set it off . - Alicia
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So, Alicia, did you really burn down a lab? ROTFL! 
Lois: Well, I like my quirks. I think they make me unique.
Clark: You certainly are unique.
Clark: You're high maintenance, you know that?
Lois: But I'm worth it!
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