Thanks for the feedback, Anna. I was relieved when you said I captured Lois's voice--she's very different from me, so I always worry that I don't quite get her character down.
And really, Deadly Chakram, I'm blushing.
As I said earlier, there's so much you could talk about and explore that I couldn't get it all in one story--or even five--so I guess that's why there's so much great fanfiction out there!
