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FDK: Chocolate Lab 8/9 #79880 06/15/11 04:56 PM
Joined: Feb 2008 Posts: 2,823 IolantheAlias OP Pulitzer
OP IolantheAlias Pulitzer Joined: Feb 2008 Posts: 2,823	Feedback here please.

Re: FDK: Chocolate Lab 8/9 #79881 06/15/11 08:53 PM
Joined: Apr 2011 Posts: 9,509 USA VirginiaR Nobel Peace Prize Winner
VirginiaR Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2011 Posts: 9,509 USA	I see you answered my question about when the next part would show up. So, Lois has a huge chunk of K and the bullet (it wasn't flushed). So are they going to the Bermuda Triangle on vacation? Quote “Am I really galac– “ A car horn honked loudly behind them, ruining the moment. Lois bit off a curse. Obviously Lois is thinking WHY hadn't she figured out Clark's secret when Bill Henderson had. And, no, Lois, you aren't! Love is blind. Duh! Clark is healing! No more surgical scars! Yea! Quote He was accustomed to his powers. When they were absent, he felt crippled – he was crippled. He hated that. Poor Clark. He doesn't know how to be himself without his powers. Quote She came near him and ran a finger down his chest. Clark froze. Fire roared up inside him at her touch. “You’re healed,” Lois said softly. “You took out the staples.” Clark’s voice choked in his mouth as he tried to reply. Lois, touching him so intimately… he couldn’t speak. Lois licked her lips, and Clark was almost undone. Lois’s eyes widened and she put her entire hand on his chest, not just one finger. The electricity between them fairly crackled. We still don't have that smiley fanning itself, do we? I need it for that small moment. Wow! Quote Aroused wasn’t the kind of answer he could give his mother. Quote Clark smiled as he recognized the small box of tiramisu. Maybe he’d finally get to feed Lois her dessert – third time lucky? "Oh, Goody! More tiramisu," thinks Moose. Quote “Yes, you,” Clark replied. “Perry made you my keeper while I healed from the surgery. Well, I’m healed, but I can’t let anyone know. Anyone but you, of course.” Ideas began to bubble. “Isn’t it time that you had a vacation, too? You’ve been working just as hard as I have over the last two years.” “Well…” “I’m thinking of chocolates in Switzerland, seeing the whales near Antarctica, lounging on a tropical beach,” Clark cajoled. “It’s true,” Martha said, amused. “Lois, you know Superman. You should take advantage.” Isn't that what you interrupted in the other room, Martha? Lois taking advantage. And if Clark doesn't have the power of flight yet and Lois is still guardian of Moose, I'm thinking first few days will be spent in Metropolis. What?! Only one more part left? Oh, my. We better see some more heat like we saw when Lois touched Clark. Please! Pretty, please! If you can't tell, very much enjoying this fic. VirginiaR. "On the long road, take small steps." -- Jor-el, "The Foundling" --- "clearly there is a lack of understanding between those two... he speaks Lunkheadanian and she Stubbornanian" -- chelo.

Re: FDK: Chocolate Lab 8/9 #79882 06/15/11 10:37 PM
Joined: Jun 2010 Posts: 1,200 Boston, MA mozartmaid Top Banana
mozartmaid Top Banana Joined: Jun 2010 Posts: 1,200 Boston, MA	I LOVE this story! sigh I don't want it to end! The little scene with Lois touching Clark's chest sizzled right off the page, er screen. Loved it! Quote “I’m thinking of chocolates in Switzerland, seeing the whales near Antarctica, lounging on a tropical beach,” Clark cajoled. Sounds good to me! Where do I sign up, Superman? Reach for the moon, for even if you fail, you'll still land among the stars... and who knows? Maybe you'll meet Superman along the way.

Re: FDK: Chocolate Lab 8/9 #79883 06/16/11 08:23 AM
Joined: Nov 2010 Posts: 1,724 Likes: 1 out in the cornfields S scifiJoan Merriwether
scifiJoan Merriwether S Joined: Nov 2010 Posts: 1,724 Likes: 1 out in the cornfields	Glad to see Clark is recovering and that Lois seems to be forgiving him. Love the idea of Lois and Clark having a three week vacation. I'm worried about all those fresh fruits and vegatables going bad too. Joan

Re: FDK: Chocolate Lab 8/9 #79884 06/16/11 02:27 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY Laurach Pulitzer
Laurach Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY	Cute chapter. Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?” Caroline's "Stardust"

Re: FDK: Chocolate Lab 8/9 #79885 06/18/11 02:33 AM
Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,070 Likes: 31 Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,070 Likes: 31	Quote “He said, ‘You can’t fix stupid.’” Exhibit A "I love her but it's best to let her think I'm dead" Quote “Am I really galac– “ Poor Clarkie-pooh Quote Lois came out of the bathroom and looked at the pile with poorly concealed panic. Clark recognized the fear that she might actually be called upon to cook some of this someday. On the other hand, now Clark will have to come over and do something with all those supplies before they spoil. Quote “Since I know Superman, maybe I can ask his mother questions about his childhood.” Clark groaned. His father looked on in amusement as Martha started. “Oh, he was such a sweet little baby when he came to us in that spaceship…” Quote Maybe he’d finally get to feed Lois her dessert – third time lucky? I guess, now that he's all healed up and Lois is left with lot's of wanting as far as Clark sans shirt is concerned, part 9 will give it all a nice bow on top? Michael Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, our favorite show, life, and more! (It’s almost like the IRC days of old again!) I go by Michael on the Archives.

Re: FDK: Chocolate Lab 8/9 #79886 06/18/11 03:57 PM
Joined: May 2011 Posts: 6,142 Likes: 3 Connecticut Deadly Chakram Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Deadly Chakram Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: May 2011 Posts: 6,142 Likes: 3 Connecticut	Quote That was his mother, Clark thought. In a crisis, her instinct was to feed everyone. Is Martha related to my late grandmother? Quote When they were absent, he felt crippled – he was crippled. He hated that. Very insightful. I've never seen it described that way before. Quote Aroused wasn’t the kind of answer he could give his mother. Quote Clark smiled as he recognized the small box of tiramisu. Maybe he’d finally get to feed Lois her dessert – third time lucky? Awwwww! Quote “Since I know Superman, maybe I can ask his mother questions about his childhood.” LOL! So in-character. I always loved how well Lois and the Kents got along on the show. Great ending. Glad to see everything work out all right - even Lois accepting Clark for who he is. Battle On, Deadly Chakram "Being with you is stronger than me alone." ~ Clark Kent "One little spark of inspiration is at the heart of all creation." ~ Figment the Dragon

Re: FDK: Chocolate Lab 8/9 #79887 06/18/11 08:27 PM
Joined: Dec 2008 Posts: 2,181 Likes: 29 SW Vic, Australia Female Hawk Kerth
Female Hawk Kerth Joined: Dec 2008 Posts: 2,181 Likes: 29 SW Vic, Australia	Quote Martha ran her hand down Clark’s chest as well, clucking in satisfaction as she noted the absence of the surgical staples. “How are you feeling, honey?” Aroused wasn’t the kind of answer he could give his mother. Clark settled for, “Fine.” Still

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