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Feedback earns you my love!
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"Being with you is stronger than me alone." ~ Clark Kent
"One little spark of inspiration is at the heart of all creation." ~ Figment the Dragon
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Aww that was beautiful. I always thought Clark should have told her when she came over to see him to tell him she chose him. I like her reaction better than in the series as well. If he would have told her at this point, it makes sense that she wouldn't be upset with him. They weren't even officially together yet. Great job!
Superman: I hear you've been looking for me.
Lois: All my life.
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Originally posted by jackiek:
Aww that was beautiful. I always thought Clark should have told her when she came over to see him to tell him she chose him. I like her reaction better than in the series as well. If he would have told her at this point, it makes sense that she wouldn't be upset with him. They weren't even officially together yet. Great job! Thank you very much! This was a lot of fun to write. I'm polishing the one I write for Lois in response to the challenge as we speak.
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"Being with you is stronger than me alone." ~ Clark Kent
"One little spark of inspiration is at the heart of all creation." ~ Figment the Dragon
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Blogger
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Wonderful story very well done 
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Originally posted by Mpj891: Wonderful story very well done Thanks so much! 
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Truly Awesome! Great story!  Artemis
History is easy once you've lived it. - Duncan MacLeod
Writing history is easy once you've lived it. - Artemis
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Originally posted by Artemis: Truly Awesome! Great story!
Artemis Thank you Artemis!
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Brava! A perfect rewrite of the scene- always thought that Lois deserved better here, deserved to know the truth. And another great example of the name game competition!
Nothing spoils a good story like the arrival of an eye witness.
--Mark Twain
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Originally posted by Mouserocks: Brava! A perfect rewrite of the scene- always thought that Lois deserved better here, deserved to know the truth. And another great example of the name game competition! Thanks so much, Mouse! I mean, I understand just why the show handled it the way they did, but it would have been nice for Clark to tell her earlier.
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Well done! Two thumbs way up! 
This *is* my happily ever after.
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Originally posted by HappyGirl: Well done! Two thumbs way up! Aww! Thanks so much HappyGirl! 
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Lovely lovely job!! Clark said so much yet only said one word-- Wonderfully done!
EvelynC
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Originally posted by EvelynC: Lovely lovely job!! Clark said so much yet only said one word-- Wonderfully done! Thank you, Evelyn!
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