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#82370 09/29/11 05:25 AM
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#82372 09/29/11 09:47 AM
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OMG LOL! That would be sooo flippin' funny and fantastic.


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Thanks for the feedback Mouserocks and jackiek.

I'm glad you thought it would be fun to see something like that on DH, jackiek

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PS- loved the throw in of the haircut and how he asked if she would be his Lois Lane. love Aaaawwww... Great inclusions.
I was going to try to do more with the haircut , having her feel like she looked like someone else, but it didn't flow well.

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PPS (or is it PSS? I've forgotten...)- Is he really Superman? The fire conveniently going out? Saving the bowl of frosting? Just wondering.
This version of Superman is just Dean in his costume. Version two is the real thing.

Glad to hear you enjoyed this version.

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#82374 09/30/11 03:34 AM
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Delightful premis! smile1

Actually Teri hasn't been able to completely get away from Superman. James Denton (Mike Delfino) is doing the Superman voice in a new set of cartoons. rotflol


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Actually Teri hasn't been able to completely get away from Superman. James Denton (Mike Delfino) is doing the Superman voice in a new set of cartoons. rotflol
That is funny!

#82376 10/06/11 07:33 PM
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Okay, I've only seen a handful of DH eps thanks to Lifetime reruns. But this could be interesting!

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She could shoot Mike for buying those for him.
Nice. She wants to shoot the one who gave the kid a gun. I love the irony.

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Cooking had never been one of Susan’s strong suites.
How like Lois!

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Then, upon their arrival, Gabby’s girls had used all the birthday cupcakes Susan had painstakingly baked and decorated the night before as ammunition in a battle between the sexes.
rotflol

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She’d recently changed her hair style. Rather than her usual long locks, she’d had it cut radically shorter into a stylish bob.
Tank will be happy!

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Somehow he managed to quickly reach over to retrieve the bowl before the contents dumped all over the floor.
rotflol

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Then the fire vanished just as quickly as it had appeared. Superman had grabbed a nearby fire extinguisher to put it out.
Love the "almost real Superman" moments that aren't. smile

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“Could you be my Lois Lane?”
Awwww!

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“Then why do you have to save her so much?” she teased.

“Good question. Sometimes she doesn’t think things through very well. She tends to look before she leaps. But Lois is tough.”
Love it!

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Had the two of them been lovers in former lives?
You could say that...

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Susan strongly suspected that she didn’t have a child’s birthday party in mind.
rotflol

Very cute! Can't wait to read the alt-ending!


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