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Hi,

Great part. drool

More soon, please.

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AWWWWW! More soon. Laura


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I remember this part. *sighs happily* And it has one of my favorite fanfic lines of all time:
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Just one of my many baggage compartments flying open in the middle of a flight.
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Missy

I love this part. The changes to the episode are great. smile1

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Just one of my many baggage compartments flying open in the middle of a flight.
Love the metaphor, Missy! Perfect for Lois, and so very sweet to see her feel relaxed enough with Clark to admit it.

Okay, so the angst factor won't be ratcheted too high, apparently. Whew. smile I suppose you stuck in the Jimmy scene to placate Tank? goofy

Please don't let Clark fall into the familiar trap of waiting forever for a right moment that never comes. The closer they get, the more hurt she'll be. Tell her, Clark! ASAP!

Hazel, looking forward to MORE! smile


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Okay Missy, finally catching up with this again!! smile1

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That, was such a sweet part...I wanted to pick a few moments from the part you posted to comment how wonderful they are, but there are so many of them that I simply don't know which ones to choose...I just love the way you're handling this story (for instance when Clark kisses her and what happens between them after that)...you really do have a lot of talent as a writer and in touching the heart of your readers...it makes me just the more eager to read the next parts.

Thank you for continuing this great story!! smile1 I can't wait to read more.

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Quick, I need a mop!
That was such a fuzzy ending.
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Hey Maria, Laura, Rivka, Tricia, Jose, Hazel and Ren!

Thanks for the comments! Glad you like the metaphor, Hazel and Rivka, I thought it suited Lois perfectly in this situation. smile

Jose, have you been lurking in my hard drive? Yep, they're going to have to watch those hands!!

Thanks everyone for sticking around and reading!

Next part is up!

Missy


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