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A taste of Chapter 9, Part 5...

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They arrived at the Hotel Teddy Bear at ten o’clock that night. Clark had hardly spoken another word to her for the rest of the journey. He couldn’t think of anything to say. She had cheated on him. She admitted it. Not in so many words and not to his face. He loved her so much that this betrayal burned through him like Kryptonite. He felt numb again. They walked up to the counter, tired and exhausted and ready to sleep.

“Mr. and Mrs. Kent,” he said, handing over his driver’s license.

“Ah, our honeymooners,” the man behind the front desk beamed at them.

“Honeymooners?” Clark asked. Oh, God. Did Perry reserve them the honeymoon suite?

“Just sign here.”

Clark signed.

“Here are your keys. Top floor.” Actual keys with teddy bear key chains. Quaint. “Do you need help with your bags?”

Lois shook her head adamantly. She remembered the bellhop from their stay at the Lexor hotel.

“No. We can manage,” he replied.

The front desk clerk pointed the way to the elevators. Clark nodded and picked up his small bag, leaving Lois and her two bags behind.

“A little help here, please, Clark.”

Clark glanced back at his wife, but then continued on. He didn’t really feel like helping her. She could manage. He heard her grab her bags and drag them to the elevator.

“Clark, please.”

He rolled his eyes with a sigh and pushed the door open button, allowing her into the elevator with him.

“Thank you,” Lois said, dragging her suitcases inside.

When the elevator arrived on the top floor he picked up her bags with his, more out of habit than any other reason, and trudged down the hall to their room.

“Thank you, Clark.”

Clark opened the door to their room and threw their bags inside. Then he turned around to face her. “Do you need a lift, Mrs. Kent?”

Lois smiled expectantly.

“Tough,” he replied, entering the room and leaving her out in the hall.
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Anyone else want to smack Lois and Clark upside the head for being idiots? They really need to sit down and talk things through. All this not talking is driving me and them nuts.

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Originally posted by StarKat:
Anyone else want to smack Lois and Clark upside the head for being idiots? They really need to sit down and talk things through. All this not talking is driving me and them nuts.

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I don't want to give any spoilers, but they do start to talk edited for spoilage and added... eventually.


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Talk about bad timing on the train. I'm glad the truth is starting to come out that they'll be dealing with it soon.

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Joan: Dealing with it and accepting it are two different things.


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Uh ohhhhh!
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/watches dust cloud on left lane/
goofy Maybe he could gift her an apron for next Valentine’s Day?

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“You and Penny come to an arrangement?”
Yeah. She doesn’t try to jump Lois’s husband and Lois lets her watch the baby in exchange for a reasonable wage.

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Clark thought about that. Penny might have a point, there. “I’m not admitting anything to her.”
laugh And it’s still funny that Jimmy’s not in the know.

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“She brought these. Financial information. Family background. Full bio.”
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“Why does she want this job so badly?” It really was only a glorified babysitting position.
She’s too young to be Alexandra, isn’t she? Still going with Mindy. The rest is just some author trying to plant false leads.

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Lois smiled. “It might be like a second honeymoon.”

“So it doesn’t matter where we go.” Clark grinned.
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Michael: I believe that dust cloud was Mrs. Luthor. You know she never follows any traffic laws (LL school of driving). laugh

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She’d probably freak and tear the Bat a new one.
And, of course, Clark would misinterpret it and...

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Maybe he could gift her an apron for next Valentine’s Day?
Best to stick with chocolate.

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And it’s still funny that Jimmy’s not in the know.
Well, yeah. evil

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<<nuclear explosion>>
Why we have global warming?

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Yes, Clark. Lois spent the entire year in Clark’s bed. And when they found the other Lois, they just made room in the bed.
Yep, Clark's got an overactive immagination.

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So, he’s mentally leaving her and thus hurting her telepathically?
Hhhhmmm, interesting analysis.

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<<NCIS pictures>>
/mutters to self - I've really got to catch up with Tony and Gibbs.

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She trained him well. Or did he learn that from his favorite ADA?
Does Clark only learn things from women? Not from school or life experience or any... wallbash never mind.

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Hellooooo? Boundaries!
They were just trying to be helpful.

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Oh you’re bad. And good!
Who, me? angel-devil

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Not feeling so ultra now, are we, Lois?
So, you're thinking she's looking for an electrical storm?


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You know she never follows any traffic laws (LL school of driving).
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(Although someday it might come out that Penny Barnes is related to Henry Barnes, notorious gold-thief from ILTY.
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