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A taste of Chapter 9, Part 6... Clark walked in, carrying an ice-cream cone. He must have found the parlor, too. He looked so good in those shorts. She rarely got to see his legs because he always had to hide the Superman suit. She drifted across the tub and leaned on her arms, watching him move around the room. He set his wallet, cell phone, and keys on the dresser. He hadn’t realized, yet, that he wasn’t alone. Or had he? As Clark passed her, heading again for the balcony, she couldn’t stop herself and whistled a cat call. He froze and turned around.
“Hi, there, handsome. Want to join me?” Lois smiled seductively at him.
Clark swallowed. “Hello, Lois.”
Lois looked him up and down. “You look good in shorts. You should wear them more often.” She licked her lips.
“Lois? Are you feeling all right?”
“Um-hmmm.”
“You want me to join you in the tub?”
Lois nodded.
“You do realize that I’m still mad at you, right?” Clark asked with a raised brow.
“Um-hmmm.”
“Lois, has the music messed with your mind?”
She shook her head. “I love you. I will always love you. And I know, somewhere deep inside all that pain you’re feeling, that you still love me. So, I was thinking that we could try a different kind of anger therapy.”
“That’s not going to happen,” Clark replied, walking towards their luggage. She watched as he pulled his thick book out of his travel bag and sat down on the loveseat. Please post comments here. Thank you. *** Missing Lois - TOC
VirginiaR. "On the long road, take small steps." -- Jor-el, "The Foundling" --- "clearly there is a lack of understanding between those two... he speaks Lunkheadanian and she Stubbornanian" -- chelo.
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Glad they're starting to talk. I wish Lois would go into more detail with Clark because those were pretty important.
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I like the boldness of this fic, dealing with a topic that we'd never expect from L&C - infidelity.
It makes sense (as you said) that the only person Lois would cheat on Clark with would be another version of Clark. And she tried to resist.
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Joan: edited for possible spoilage. IolanthAlias: Thank you. But even so, cheating is still cheating.
VirginiaR. "On the long road, take small steps." -- Jor-el, "The Foundling" --- "clearly there is a lack of understanding between those two... he speaks Lunkheadanian and she Stubbornanian" -- chelo.
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She had cheated on him. […] “Ah, our honeymooners,” the man behind the front desk beamed at them. “Save your breath, the other Clark already read me the riot act. I wasn’t allowed to leave the apartment without police escort for a month.” Michael
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Michael: Bad Clark. Bad...Oh Clark. Clark. Clark... Really, Clark? Um... Lois did admit to cheating on him. Okay. We *could* work with that So, Zelos, how you doing? Does he *really* think that’s a good way to explain is problems to his parents? Some things shouldn't be discussed with one parents (especially over the telephone). That’s one across her left cheek. No one said Clark can't fight dirty, only that he can't touch Lois while doing so. “Yeah, but maybe not so blunt?” So, he wants the gorey details? Oh Clark. Not deep enough in there already? LOIS! CHEATED! ON! HIM! Lex Jr. had this little private dacha in the Metropolis woods. <<shakes head sadly>> Make up for lost chances by boinking the other Lex? Yes, that was what Lois was thinking. Thankfully, not Clark. Lois heard a key in the lock and she sunk lower under the bubbles.
Ooooooooh! And fade to black! TBC...
VirginiaR. "On the long road, take small steps." -- Jor-el, "The Foundling" --- "clearly there is a lack of understanding between those two... he speaks Lunkheadanian and she Stubbornanian" -- chelo.
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Um... Lois did admit to cheating on him. Your point being? No one said Clark can't fight dirty, only that he can't touch Lois while doing so. Already read way too far ahead. /please expect lots of FDK in the board of your choice over the weekend. Michael
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Originally posted by Darth Michael: Already read way too far ahead. /please expect lots of FDK in the board of your choice over the weekend.Board of my choice? Are you going to start swearing at my characters? <<shudder>> At me? Or add an Nfic Addeneum? Actually, reading something like that might be fun. Like fanfiction of my fanfiction.
VirginiaR. "On the long road, take small steps." -- Jor-el, "The Foundling" --- "clearly there is a lack of understanding between those two... he speaks Lunkheadanian and she Stubbornanian" -- chelo.
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Michael PS: It really was just fancy for 'right here' PPS: I've actually already seen FanFanFic. Including here somewhere...
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