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A lot happening in this chapter!

Aykira seems to be more of a tragic heroine. Why do people on her world live twice as long? If Lex in this world doesn't have long to live, why is she staying? Is it just because the Lex in her world dumped her for another woman?

What about those crystals? Everyone wants them. Will Superman be able to break up an illegal transaction?

Looking forward to more!

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Let's hope Lois, with a little assistance from Superman is able to find those crystals!

Alex lost a good woman when he chose Toni Baines as his wife.


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FInally Aykira got the crystals! At last her effort and hard work panned out. notworthy Confronting Dr. Scott was a bold and risky movement, but it paid off. Her mission is accomplished and her world is safe but her personal life is another matter.

So she has decided to stay. Well, if Lex wasn't ill it would be impossible due to her lifespam. But considering that he's ill and has a short time left, she can enjoy some time with him and go back to her world afterwards. It's sad, but maybe it's the closest that she will be to realizing her dream, as the Luthor from her world is going to marry Tony Baines. sad

Life is good in Lois & Clark front. They're cute when they aren't being stubborn and fighting. laugh

Andreia


"My wife's love is what unites Krypton and Earth in my heart. Without it, without her, I truly would be in hell."

~ Superman: Man of Tomorrow #15
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Thank you UltraWoman! hyper

That is exactly what's happening with Aykira! Her long drawn out mission is finally accomplished. Her world now has a definite hope for the future. Yet what is the point of returning home when the man you risked all for is marrying someone else? Part 17 will have a couple of surprises. Thanks so much for sticking with the ride.

Lois and Clark are best when they are partners working as a team.


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