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Nightfall Honeymoon TOC Sorry about the lack of a cliffy ending. I'll make it up to you next time.  Thank you for reading. Thoughts?
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It was kinda cliffy. Good chapter, tho! Both L&C thinking the other hates them~ very typical.  cant wait for more (& the makeup)... *apologies 4 poor grammar. On phone... 
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Originally posted by Mouserocks: It was kinda cliffy. Good chapter, tho! Both L&C thinking the other hates them~ very typical. cant wait for more (& the makeup)...
*apologies 4 poor grammar. On phone... Thank you, MouseRocks. I hope your laptop didn't commit sucide again. More is now up and running.
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First, he had made love to her. Then he claimed she didn’t love him enough. On top of all that, he had left a huge mess for her to clean up. So, first he made a mess, and then he made a *mess*. He would be lucky if she accepted him back. He would be lucky if she spoke to him again. How about she accepts him but doesn’t speak to him? “Around? Around? Want to be a little more specific there, Kent?” the man – Joe, was it? – sounded quite angry. Huh, it completely slipped my mind that he never actually quit after getting shanghaied into the Daily Planet by the brunette lure the caption used. “Niagara Falls? Oh, my God, Kent! Did you marry Lois Lane?” The man laughed as if he couldn’t believe his own words. Well, it was the only to get into her… Oh, wait, it wasn’t!  Michael
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Michael: More FDK  Now! There's a good ending! Watch out for that tree! … Break! Break! … No, not straight at the pedestrian! … One way street!  Aaaaaahhhhhmm… Does he *really* think that’s gonna get him out of the mess? If I remember my DC canon correctly, isn't Batman the one who thinks? Superman acts, right? And why is selling your own story for sex a lack of journalistic integrity? Wouldn’t that lack be on the side of the pimpess renting out the boyfriend? I never said this Linda was batting 1000. She is trying to find me and hit me with a 2x4? She is asking herself that very same question at that very same time? Probably. Sorry, that excuse only works for booboos and nonos from *before*. That information was from *after*, and with written down with extra fat markers. Good thing, he didn't try it on the Missus. Ivy’s worried about being evicted? Wouldn't that be scary? Both IVY and Zelos inside of Lois. She wouldn't need green nuggets would she? ”Get back here right this instance, you super-powered, muttonheaded idiot!” She might get more than one responce with that vague call. Plus calling out for a super-powered person might be overheard by the tabloids.
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Well... there *was* more story Doesn't really work with Clark thinking he was a virgin, does it? It was his first day on the job? If I remember my DC canon correctly, isn't Batman the one who thinks? Superman acts, right? And in LnC, he re-acts. To Lois, that is. Wouldn't that be scary? Both IVY and Zelos inside of Lois. She wouldn't need green nuggets would she? She might get more than one responce with that vague call. Plus calling out for a super-powered person might be overheard by the tabloids. Huh. Who else is superpowered? Michael
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Green Lantern? (I know, not technically, but he's more of a bad boy who would look past that blurry line than, say, Batman.)
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