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Nightfall Honeymoon TOC

I would like to apologize again for not being able to get the whole story on the boards before my holiday break. I'll post Part 19 around the 28th (Wed, next week).

I hope you enjoyed tonight's tease. evil

Thank you for reading. Feel free to read me the riot act here.

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*So* many great little lines in there! I'll quote only one:

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Clark stiffened. “Are you going to call me by … my birth name every time you think I’m acting a dense idiot?”

She shrugged. “If the shoe fits…”
So very true.

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Caught up again! hyper

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“You so lost,” she told her husband.
Oooooh, so, we do get a reference to 17.5 wave Michael


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IolantheAlias: Thank you. So kind. wave And here I thought I had lost you completely for some reason. And after I... Never mind. laugh <<clears throat>> Welcome back.

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Oooooh, so, we do get a reference to 17.5
They needed something else to occupy their time after Clark recovered his memories. (And that would be Naughty 17.5, in case anyone else was wondering).

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Shouldn’t the game console tell them who won the race?
Michael, Michael. It isn't a race to see who can finish first. It's a challenge to MAKE the other person finish first. Much more difficult.

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/imagines same grin in front of Sam Lane. Although, Clark’d probably be blanched and Lois would wear the naughty grin/
Yep, probably so.

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They’d first need to install red lights and really private booths.
Not really the image MJ's Cafe was going for.

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Superman will disappear from the night sky?
Has he reappeared yet?

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Right. Looks like she accepted the new apartment.
Bed won't arrive for weeks. She's talking about fulfilling his wish that the first thing they buy was a new bed.

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How about he has his mother build a little portable refrigeration unit that he can wear under his clothes?
Bulky.

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Lois! /tries to mimic shocked expression/
Me thinks you aren't really all that shocked.

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How about Kevlar underwear?
Doesn't quite have the same give as Spandex.

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So, how are they gonna pay the deposit?
This was kind-of answered in GEM's Epilogue, but if you can't remember I'll tell you after I post part 20.

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I just realized, shouldn’t you hide the MetStar inside the sex mag instead the other way around?
Only if one is married to Lois Lane.

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Which they won’t do, right?
I'm not allowed to answer this question due to the laws of spoilage. Part 19 coming right up.


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And here I thought I had lost you completely for some reason.
goofy hyper

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Good chapter! Seeing how you're just about done posting now, I guess I should jump back on the comments wagon...
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“You begged me to join you,” she said.

“That’s not true. I didn’t ‘beg’.” He pressed his lips together in a line. “I humbly requested your participation in the mutually agreed upon completion of said act,” Clark responded and then shot her one his best sheepish smiles.

He totally begged.
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Finally, she said, “Honey, if your swimmers were all that Super, wouldn’t I be full of holes from where they escaped?”
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Lois giggled, embarrassed. Then she plunged ahead. “Why did Superman read Love Fortress International?”
/spits water over keyboard/ Lo-is! I think *why* Superman reads dirty magazines all alone in his spare time is Superman's business and Superman's business alone. Unless you're laying some sort of claim to the Man of Steel...
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“I had taken some newspapers from inside a few recycle bins,” he said, deciding not to mention that it had been a Met Star he had been stealing.
Yes. Sex mags are okay, but the Met Star is a no-no.
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“The restaurant is on the beach… Just off of Langosta,”
/perks up/ Skinny dipping?
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“Clothing optional?”

Clark bit into a fry. This time, he wore the innocent expression. “Only if we decide to go swimming.”
devil Great stuff! On to read and comment more!


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MouseRocks! clap

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Best line this chapter.
Thank you.

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Ah, Lois. Always the one to be technical.
There's a reason she doesn't write for the science section.

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/spits water over keyboard/ Lo-is! I think *why* Superman reads dirty magazines all alone in his spare time is Superman's business and Superman's business alone. Unless you're laying some sort of claim to the Man of Steel...
I apologize for surpris... What AM I writing? Of course, I don't! evil Michael I'm sure can recommend a good keyboard cover. wink

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Yes. Sex mags are okay, but the Met Star is a no-no.
Yep. One is porn. The other is smut for stupid people.


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Michael I'm sure can recommend a good keyboard cover.
Umm... actually... I always put liquids away first blush

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