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Continuing to enjoy this, looking forward to more.
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Originally posted by Marcus Rowland:
Continuing to enjoy this, looking forward to more. Thanks so much, Marcus! 
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Officially relieved with this chapter- what with Lois and co. all coming back to the land of the living- and also glad it didn't last so long.  More worried now though about Alti. I don't think that was such a good idea after all, going to fight her, because I'm not so sure how much it slowed her down... As always, waiting for more. 
Nothing spoils a good story like the arrival of an eye witness.
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I'm worried that even Xena, bolstered by three other spirits, wasn't able to take out Alti all the way. This doesn't bode well.
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</font><blockquote><font size="1" face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif">quote:</font><hr /><font size="2" face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif">Originally posted by Mouserocks: <strong> Officially relieved with this chapter- what with Lois and co. all coming back to the land of the living- and also glad it didn't last so long. More worried now though about Alti. I don't think that was such a good idea after all, going to fight her, because I'm not so sure how much it slowed her down... As always, waiting for more.  Thanks, Mouse! I couldn't torture you guys too long by making Lois and company hang out in the spirit realm for too long. I love being evil as a writer, but I'm not *too* evil!
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Originally posted by IolantheAlias:
I'm worried that even Xena, bolstered by three other spirits, wasn't able to take out Alti all the way. This doesn't bode well. Hi Io! Yep, Alti's not going to go down without a fight....
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Oh! Darth Michael is here! 
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*checks Lois' Best Used By date* I have frozen peas that last longer!  Yes, but Lois has more going on upstairs than those peas. Clark on the other hand... Lois is involved so I'm gonna say...Zombie Apocolypse. Like a WoW NPC, Alti can be tracked with the simple push of a button... Track Humanoids, track Animals, track Dragonkin, track Evil Shamanesses Merged With Psycho Gods.  Michael
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/looks around/ Still no sand to be seen. Neither giant stone edifices. Soon. I promise. The holiday threw off my whole editing/posting schedule.
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You have such vivid, detailed descriptions--it's clear you spend a lot of time getting what you envision in your mind's eye down just right for us readers. Very good!
Lois is certainly very versatile and adaptive--great job capturing that!
Not so sure about all the gods battles and whatnot, but I'm glad Lois is still ready to fight, no matter what!
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Originally posted by AntiKryptonite:
You have such vivid, detailed descriptions--it's clear you spend a lot of time getting what you envision in your mind's eye down just right for us readers. Very good!
Lois is certainly very versatile and adaptive--great job capturing that!
Not so sure about all the gods battles and whatnot, but I'm glad Lois is still ready to fight, no matter what!  Thanks. I live for details. Actually, Xena will make a comment about Lois in the final chapter that I think you might appreciate.
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