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Because feedback is the breakfast of champion muses!
Bonus points if you recognized the "in-joke" since Kevin Sorbo actually almost *did* get the part of Superman.
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Tearing his gaze away from the sight, he zoomed back in on the Valley of the Kings and loosed a heavy sigh I just realized. Considering their track record, will Egypt lose one of its monuments that day? It was infinitely better that no one else know about it. Are there still more out there? It remained intact, but Clark felt himself fall through it, with little more resistance than water would put up beneath his touch.  Michael
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just realized. Considering their track record, will Egypt lose one of its monuments that day? Nah. I wasn't *that* evil this time around.  Are there still more out there? Thanks for visiting!
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Wow! Great description, non-stop action, and perils for our heroes to overcome!
Looking forward to more.
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Originally posted by IolantheAlias:
Wow! Great description, non-stop action, and perils for our heroes to overcome!
Looking forward to more. Thanks so much, Io!  Glad that you are enjoying it. 
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Nah. I wasn't *that* evil this time around. /imagines this happening in the old time/ Back to the present: And here we have the mystery of the two great pyramids. Ancient texts always mention three pyramids, but so far, we where only able to find two. I'm guessing no. Unless my muse ever tells me otherwise. Then where's the harm? they get destroyed by the removal of one stone anyway. "And oh look! The world's first dirty joke is on that one!" The pharaoh and Seth are alone in the dessert... "Snakes. Why'd it have to be snakes?" /imagines Jack O'Neill (with two L) instead of Henry Jones, Jr. saying those words/ Because my muse is slightly evil. Michael
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/imagines this happening in the old time/ Back to the present: And here we have the mystery of the two great pyramids. Ancient texts always mention three pyramids, but so far, we where only able to find two.  Although, he's getting pretty good at it by now? <imagines Clark with a pile of Lois parts, singing> "The foot bone's connected to the ankle bone...the ankle bone's connected to the shin bone..."
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 Good thing it's not the other way around. Putting together all of Clark's molecules after he got disintegrated *again* would be a real nightmare. Michael
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</font><blockquote><font size="1" face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif">quote:</font><hr /><font size="2" face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif">Originally posted by Darth Michael: <strong> And I'm guessing that Lois isn't really a jigsaw puzzle person...
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Again, fabulous job on all the details! How like Clark to know all the languages--always loved that quirk--and loved his reasons for learning them.  Love that Clark was worried about the acid not for himself but for Lois. Sounded exactly like him. Whew! Glad he can get back home now!
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Again, fabulous job on all the details! Thank you! Details are so fun to write. This is why I could never be a screenwriter though. I'm a control freak like that. :p How like Clark to know all the languages--always loved that quirk--and loved his reasons for learning them. I figured there had to be a reason why other than "I was bored, so I learned Arabic." I love how you added the bit about Hercules auditioning to play Superman! Nice inside joke on the history of the show, and so subtly woven in! Thank you! I knew from the moment that I started writing this that I wanted to put that little joke in somewhere. Love that Clark was worried about the acid not for himself but for Lois. Sounded exactly like him. Whew! Glad he can get back home now! But with 4 parts left to go, I can assure you that the easiest parts are behind them all. 
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