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Its been a long time getting from fleeting concept to finished copy but this fic is finally done.

As always, feedback and comments are heartily welcome.


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Congrats on finishing!

I have to confess that I have a liking for "happily ever after" endings, and that's what you've given me here. smile

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You finished this story beautifully. thumbsup

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Thank you Andreia for the very kind words and all the help! Without it I KNOW this story would have never been completed.


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Such a sweet ending! I was surprised a little by the time jump, but I thought it worked very nicely. Good way to end this story!
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This is for Ultra Woman!

Aykira is eventually find love and companionship with Dr. Bern Klein. He was with her through the whole ordeal and understands this gentle woman and all she has accomplished.

So she would not spend her very long life alone.


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