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Wow I think I love young Lois! LOL. Who is Sarah? Poor Clark two Lois's to contend with. I can't wait for more. Laura


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Keep going! I'm having so much fun with this story!!! thumbsup


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Lois had improved. Her breathing and heart rate had returned to normal levels. She appeared to be sleeping peacefully.
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He'd known bringing her so close to his wife was risky.

But she was Lois.

And there was a chasm through his heart. A chasm of yearning.
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He'd been surprised by her breathlessness and general lacklustre appearance, but he hadn't been at all prepared for the strength of his reaction to it. He'd ached to hold her. Protect her. Offer her his strength.
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If he ordered from room service, would young Lois bring it to him?
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Wells had stressed the importance of easing seamlessly into her life and then fading away. He'd been adamant about the need to keep the two incarnations of Lois Lane apart.
I think we can scratch that one. Clark’s worse than Cpt. Janeway.

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Clark opened the door, strung between the little buzz of traitorous excitement because she was Lois and the gnawing awareness that his mission was to remain blandly unmemorable.
But as it’s already botched anyway.

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The young woman was staring at him with unmasked interest.
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She was too busy trying - with no attempt at subtlety - to look past him.
She’s new in the customer service business, isn’t she?

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Clark's heart flailed with recognition. He knew that look. It meant Lois thought she was on the trail of a story.
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The other had developed a strong distrust of him and had already seen straight through his feeble regular-guy act.
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Laura

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Poor Clark two Lois's to contend with.
This was one of the things I liked about this scenario.

Morgana Glad you're enjoying it!

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She’s new in the customer service business, isn’t she?
Yep, and just because she has to work as a hotel maid, it doesn't mean she's any less a reporter!

Thanks for the FDK,

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Wow, must be the rudest hotel staff ever! Can't believe Lois went so far. She's never been that good at hiding what she's doing, but I have to say that she obviously has gotten way better at it than she used to be. Usually, you don't want your marks to know you're on to them! laugh

Clark actually handled that pretty well--he didn't give anything away and he managed to keep calm. Love that he couldn't bring himself to push her back, as anyone else would have done, and justifiably!

So, Lois remembers him, but she doesn't remember them getting married? I hope she hasn't lost too much time. I'm trying to think of when she slept over with Sarah Crawford--is it just before their wedding when she left Clark?

Anyway, looking forward to what happens next!

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AntiK I appreciated your comment about young Lois and the youthful audacity of her 'investigation techniques'. laugh I assumed canon Lois had benefited from having Perry as an editor.

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I'm trying to think of when she slept over with Sarah Crawford--is it just before their wedding when she left Clark?
Yes. The night before the wedding.

Thanks for the FDK.

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