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FDK - Time to Love 5: Led Astray 6/? #84570 01/28/12 11:55 PM
Joined: Dec 2008 Posts: 2,181 Likes: 29 SW Vic, Australia Female Hawk OP Kerth
OP Female Hawk Kerth Joined: Dec 2008 Posts: 2,181 Likes: 29 SW Vic, Australia	Comments go here! Corrina.

Re: FDK - Time to Love 5: Led Astray 6/? #84571 01/29/12 04:18 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY Laurach Pulitzer
Laurach Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY	Loving it so far. I am so glad you decided that Lois and Clark should have each other through this hard time. I can't wait to see how they are going to go about it. laura Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?” Caroline's "Stardust"

Re: FDK - Time to Love 5: Led Astray 6/? #84572 01/29/12 07:28 AM
Joined: Aug 2009 Posts: 338 elizabeth Beat Reporter
elizabeth Beat Reporter Joined: Aug 2009 Posts: 338	That was an awesome chapter; really enjoying the story. You have set up everything nicely for an awesome adventure ahead. Can't wait to read the next part! Cheers Elizabeth

Re: FDK - Time to Love 5: Led Astray 6/? #84573 01/30/12 09:51 AM
Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,070 Likes: 31 Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,070 Likes: 31	Ooooooh! Update! Quote "You ... er... you didn't recognise her voice?" Clark asked. Quote "Then where are we?" "1985." Quote "Maybe Tempus sent him to the future," Lois said. "But wherever he is, I bet he's one very angry editor. He didn't like being pushed around by anyone." Quote I'm longing for a shower. Want to come with me?" "Ah ... " Clark picked up the copy of The Daily Planet. "I've been intending to read this - catch up on 1985." "Sure?" No, he wasn't. But ... "I showered earlier." Oh Clark… /shakes head/ Quote But none of that had been enough to dissolve the heavy burden of guilt that had solidified in his gut during the long hours as he had watched her slide to her death. Michael, who’s now waiting patiently for the much hinted at bodily transference, a.k.a. body swapping. Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, our favorite show, life, and more! (It’s almost like the IRC days of old again!) I go by Michael on the Archives.

Re: FDK - Time to Love 5: Led Astray 6/? #84574 01/31/12 04:30 PM
Joined: Dec 2004 Posts: 1,702 Canada J jackiek Merriwether
jackiek Merriwether J Joined: Dec 2004 Posts: 1,702 Canada	Oooh love it. Can't wait to see what happens during this meeting with Paul/Tempus. So glad Lois is awake and remembers their lives together. Jackie Superman: I hear you've been looking for me. Lois: All my life.

Re: FDK - Time to Love 5: Led Astray 6/? #84575 02/20/12 07:54 PM
Joined: Dec 2008 Posts: 2,181 Likes: 29 SW Vic, Australia Female Hawk OP Kerth
OP Female Hawk Kerth Joined: Dec 2008 Posts: 2,181 Likes: 29 SW Vic, Australia	Laura You bring up a crucial point - Lois and Clark together. Elizabeth Thanks for the comment. Quote You have set up Yeah. Setting up ... I can't really say anything else without giving too much away. Michael Quote /imagines Paul stuck in the Utopian Insane Asylum./ Hold that thought. Jackie Quote Can't wait to see what happens during this meeting with Paul/Tempus. You think Tempus might be Paul? Interesting. Thanks for commenting Corrina.

Re: FDK - Time to Love 5: Led Astray 6/? #84576 02/21/12 02:37 PM
Joined: Jan 2011 Posts: 966 Wyoming AntiKryptonite Features Writer
AntiKryptonite Features Writer Joined: Jan 2011 Posts: 966 Wyoming	WOW! This is definitely my favorite chapter! I love the interaction between Lois and Clark--love Clark's worry for her and his characteristic fear that it's all his fault and his terror that she'll slip away again. And I love Lois's amazing adaptability, her strength to reassure and encourage Superman. So many of the phrases and lines were just beautiful through here. I particularly liked the metaphor of her death being like a curtain that fell over life, and his simple answer to her question about whether he'd thought it was the end: 'You'd died.' For Clark, that is enough of an answer. Maybe my favorite part was when Lois showed just how great their love was--surviving no matter what separated them. And of course his reply--he had gotten her killed. Two very different views, but we all know which one's more right! Loved this chapter! Thanks!

Re: FDK - Time to Love 5: Led Astray 6/? #84577 02/27/12 11:40 AM
Joined: Dec 2008 Posts: 2,181 Likes: 29 SW Vic, Australia Female Hawk OP Kerth
OP Female Hawk Kerth Joined: Dec 2008 Posts: 2,181 Likes: 29 SW Vic, Australia	AntiK Your comment goes to the essence of their relationship - Clark worried and willing to do anything for Lois, Lois strong and adaptable. With him having superpowers, I think this paradox is one of the things that keeps us writing about Lois and Clark. Quote And I just know that our Lois and young Lois are going to end up meeting eventually We really need a 'walks away whistling innocently' graemlin! Thanks for the comments, Corrina.

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